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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Takes place prior to the start of "A New Generation".)

Alphabittle has always been seen as a pony unicorns can turn to for advice, if he feels like giving it. For the most part, Alphabittle is just content to run his tea shop and keep his mind off of other things.

One day, however, Alphabittle finds himself having to try to convince a young unicorn named Izzy from leaving Bridlewood to make friends. And it seems like Izzy isn't in a mood to be told no.

Yet Alphabittle will still try his best to get Izzy to see the world from his point of view. And by the end, Izzy might just learn something about the tallest unicorn around.

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Izzy chuckled, the apparent insult flying right over her head as if she'd never heard it. "It's not that late, Alphabittle. Besides, I'm a growing filly, I can take care of myself," She proceeded to pull out some kind of crumpled up paper as she proudly proclaimed. "I just found this letter attached to a lantern. I think it's some kind of invitation. It wants me to come to Maretime Bay, wherever that is. It's also addressed to pegasi, and it says pegasi and unicorns have friends in Maretime Bay."

Oh yeah that's why she's got the note that sunny and her father made to send out a message to any Pegasus or unicorns to check it out

Alphabittle groaned anew. "You think you're the first pony who's complained, because you're not. I've seen so many ponies in my time complain nonstop about how bad things are. They all said they were going to do something about it, but in the end nothing came of it. I learned long ago to stop complaining or caring. The world isn't going to change just because somepony wants it to. That's not how it works."

It doesn't have to be you're basically letting all the bad people get away with it

"Because I think the jinxies are silly. They're not really real, everypony here just thinks they are," Izzy said with a humph. "And I'm going to change all that, with the help of my friends in Maretime Bay. Together, we'll make all of Equestria a better place."

Don't worry izzy you won't be alone and you're not the only one who really want the World to Change

Izzy waved a hoof. "Oh relax, Alphabittle. You worry too much, you know that? You should learn to lighten up and smile more often, like I do. You'd be surprised how much of a difference it can make in the world," Then her attention was drawn to something else. To a bright, shiny blue crystal resting up on a shelf behind Alphabittle. "Say, you're not using that crystal, are you? Could I borrow it? I feel like it's going to be important, somehow."

Unless you predicted the future but izzy you're right it is very important

Well this is a pretty nice story here seen the origin of izzy and Alphabittle how they first met each other and how he can tell that she is much different from the other unicorns and this town is and sometimes he hates to admit it but he kind of wish that there are more ponies like her and not only that she really is going to make it happen once she goes to Maretime Bay yeah things will be changing again I did like to say that's how these two met each other and I did wish they kind of give out a little more detail about it but anyway this is pretty good keep up the good work

When I read this yesterday, I thought it was an okay story with not much for me to talk about. But it was only just now that I realized a discrepancy you seemed to have missed. In the movie, when Izzy brings her new friends into the Crystal Tea Room, she tells them she knows someone who collects crystals, but she is then devastated when that pony shamefully confesses that he lost his entire crystal collection to Alphabittle in a limbo contest. I'm not sure how you could correct this story to account for that, but I figured I should at least point out that little detail.

11377348 It's possible that Izzy hasn't yet realized in this story that the crystal Alphabittle has is the same one from the collection she knew about.

*arriving in Maretime Bay* "Hi new friend, my name's Izzy!"

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