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Pomp-Neigh
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Elden ring fic?, you have my attention
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Ok, I fucking love this!
I especially love how you're portraying Chadahn and Leonard, and i'm a huge fan of Malenia's motives for Radahn's Great Rune. Makes perfects sense (I'm a lore nerd, so bear with me) when you consider that everything she does, everything, is for Miquella and the order he wishes to bring about via the Haligtree.
It's never outright stated, as is the nature of FromSoft games, but that is an absolute plausible reason for their conflict, among other things.
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Thank you!
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I appreciate that!
Anyone who hears these words are already dead
Also, I always found it funny that the biggest of boys rode on this a size horse.
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Yes, it’s finally here!
And it’s a great start, I am definitely looking forward for what’s to come.
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It’s hilariously clever on the dev’s part.
When I first watched the Malenia vs Radahn trailer for the game, I automatically thought he’d be a sort of goofy antagonist while Malenia was the protagonist.
How wrong I was.
Neither of them are so black and white, good or bad, - they’re both gray. They both have their sins, but they also have admirable qualities. They live in an absolute harsh world, and are just trying to get by while staying true to their ways.
Sometimes, they’re prone to slip up.
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Awww yeeee!!
I just did research on the battle between them (I had not done so before) apparently it was a stalemate. I wonder how you gonna to adapt that? I am eager to see.
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Yeah, the community agrees that it’s a stalemate, especially since Ranni outright tells us that there would be no victor during her commentary on the battle itself.
However, we can safely say that Radahn did have the advantage, since we saw him stop to give Malenia a chance to reattach her arm, before she eventually activated her trump card.
The significance is that she swore to never use it, but found it necessary to use against Radahn. And so, she tossed aside her pride…and bloomed.
Worst part? It was all for naught…
Of course, I’m going to add my own little flare to the battle. 😎 Adapt some creativity, and more.
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There was also the fact radahn didn’t use the stars during the fight by my knowledge. Meaning, he was handy capping himself a little bit.
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I do have a question. When he inevitably gets turned into a pony, judging by the cover art he’s going to be earth pony, so how is he going to use his specialty in gravitational magic?
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Yup! You got it.
The big guy was nerfed even long before and after he had succumbed to the rot. A truly powerful individual.
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Shame on Malenia, but It's like the old saying goes: "If you can't beat 'em, give 'em an incurable STD."
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Now THAT I do have a plan and explanation for.
I think it’s within the realm of possibility, and I’m excited to show it off.
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Indeed.
Despite what some might think of her, I really can’t hold it against Malenia, either. Yes, it was a scummy thing to do, especially since we know Radahn also held back something that could destroy Caelid, but didn’t resort to it.
Yet, I can understand where Malenia is coming from. One does desperate things when it’s for the people they love.
Sadly, she lost everything after her scarlet bloom. Her warrior’s pride, having to use the curse she swore to overcome, and worst of all, she lost her brother.
I can’t help but feel bad for her, even though she’s killed me many times over and over again in my first play through.
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Well the whole thing with Earth ponies having some form of geomancy and the fact that he can coat his swords and rocks makes me believe that gravity magic is actually intrinsically connected to the planet or Earth that you're connected to meaning it's one of the greatest forms of geomancy as it's using the very force that keeps the planet together as your weapon. (Did I get it right?)
You have my attention
Now this! This has my attention cause i am a sucker for supposedly dead characters getting second chances!
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Hell yeah!
(Love your Noble Six series, btw!
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The Queen of the Halo tag thanks thee
Oh, shit... For those who don't know, Radahh is holding up a plethora of meteors that will crash into the Lands Between should he ever die or let them loose. However, there's something else... You know those stars he's also holding back? Some of those are eldritch monstrosities... Just look up Fallen Starbeast and Astel...
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I'm starting to think that Rennala's plan, although understandable, is gonna backfire on the Lands Between...
I wonder if the amber egg will stop the rot form destroying his kingdom?
General Rahdan, Leader of the Red-Manes. The man who conquered From Software's hardest boss, Gravity itself. Fight this Scarlett wench till the last, for The Starsourge shall never lose a fair fight.
In all seriousness, I had more trouble fighting Rahdan then I did fighting Melina, Blade of the Rage-Quit.
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I can safely say that Malenia's bloom will still transpire.
It won't, sadly.
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It was similar for me, too. The entire fight is just hype!
The music, charging toward Radahn on Torrent's back, which is made even cooler if you call in all of the summons available to you, and best of all, we're not killing some tyrant or something along those lines. We're giving the big guy a proper sendoff, and he absolutely deserves an honorable death.
What I would give to see him back in his prime in-game.
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It took me ten times to beat Radahn, but that was mostly me just figuring out how to reach him on horseback. I managed to kill him the second time I reached him by letting him get distracted with Jarbro and his friends and then summoning a giant freakin' dragon arm to spank him to death, like the sexy little coward I am.
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Nice. The dragon spells are my favorite, didn't find out that the rot breath was cheese for most enemies until my friends told me. Fire and frost were my go to until I got the roar and magma.
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Rennala is much more lucid than she was in the game, she may be able to at least redirect the stars.
A being the likes of which you have never seen before has appeared, and is sleeping. Let's wake it up!
???: Bwahahahahaha! Well this is sure ta be interestin' lads!
ah, no great rune then. He's... not going to like that. Payment for services rendered i suppose.
So, is this rated Mature for sex?
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From how Maker made it sound, I can see two things happening:
1) They’re holding onto it
2) Either Radahn or Leonard has it.
We at least know for a fact that Radahn’s Great Rune came with them. So I think it’s safe to say that it’s here.
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Oh, I can safely say that his Great Rune does come into play. But it has a very...particular role.
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Not exactly. While sex will be hinted at and very heavily implied to have happened or is going to happen, I won't be writing any full-on sex scenes.
The M rating is more for everything else, really. Violence, slavery - which is connected to the 'specism' that will take place in this story. And several other subjects that can be equally as harsh. I'm playing it safe, you could say. But definitely no 'clop' scenes.
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We shall see!
A great chapter, Pomp, really well written!
Plus, I see that you used the song :)
Also, a nerd moment
Archers used “Ready-Nock-Mark-Draw-Loose” commands. “Fire” wasn’t used until the gunpowder and flintlock weapons became rather common on the battlefields.
End of the nerd moment.
Honestly this seems pretty good can't wait for the next one
Where is his steed Leonard? I did not see him mentions to have appeared.
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I can edit that in easily, and will definitely keep it in mind going forward.
Oh, snap! Thank you for that!
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Thank you very much!
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Leonard is the one who is set down in front of Mulan.
Radahn's in the desert of Saddle Arabia.
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Thank you
A very emotionally charged chapter.
Though, I must say, I kept getting taken out of the moment as it kept switching between present and past tense so frequently.