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nice work
Finally, a M/F harem.
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Agreed on all fronts
Do the girls look like who they're likely named after, that being the Scotsman's Daughters from Samurai Jack?
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Sure why not
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I was mainly wondering if you are just using the names. Cause honestly, if it the Dryad's were based on them, then the mother would be Flora.
Though in my opinion, as monster girls, they'd fit in better as the more muscular/athletic types, such as Amazons.
Considering on how great Male Sunset is as a stud. The Rainbooms really did screwed up big time for betraying him like that. Now, Trixie has all to himself, suckers!
And the Dazzlings and background characters like Derpy, Octavia, Vinyl, Lyra, Bon Bon will possibly be next for his potential non-monster girl harem.
what surprises me is the fact that you can milk sheep like goats and cows, that is something that i have never even thought about. good job mate.
This chapter feels like some things were removed. Trixie was clothed when she showed up but is suddenly naked a bit later with her commenting on her clothes being folded up near by.
So basically Anon-a-Miss but it happened during the events of Camp Everfree instead of after Rainbow Rocks?
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If it was, it doesn't make sense? Because I doubt Sci-Twi will just betray Male Sunset as well ( Plus, she is on the same boat for being a "magic demon" like Sunset was. ). And this is way further in the timeline that Sunset made many good deeds to redeem himself.
It wouldn't "realistically" make sense that he turn back to being bad!!?? Especially after saving the frickin world/reality ( Friendship Games. ) and the camp everfree.
And what about the geodes? Wasn't it Sunset's power that can reads minds? Why didn't he really use that to find the real culprits ( CMC. )?
Finally, some realistically punishment!
The CMC's Sisters and their own Parents are definitely AIN'T happy with them now.
I would like to see this get focused on more? And if you want, you can have the Monster Girls themselves take their own "pay back" against them all too, for Sunset's sake.
This is the one setting that having them get "plowed" is more justified.
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“I…,” Trixie mutters as she undresses herself in front of Sunset, blushing as there’s a crowd watching.
Trixie stood in front of Sunset naked with her clothes in a pile next to her with her sandals.
nice work
nice work
Very nice chapter.
nice work
This is basically good ole karma bitting into the human women asses for sealing the monster women in the first place.
True.
The big reveal will be historic. And a massive blessing for the guys.
P.S. Will male Sunset see his former "friends" again?
Because, I bet that the monster girls want to teach them all a HUGE LESSON, as revenge on betraying him.
nice work
Yeah, you have to personally deal with those "groups", and make it hurt.
I wonder how your former "friends" will react to that.
nice work
Eventually, we will see the reactions out of the Rainbooms, CMC, their families, principal Celestia/Luna, and the rest of CHS for seeing all of this.
And figure out that our Male Sunset is responsible for freeing and helping out the monstergirls. ( And is also with the Dazzlings and human Trixie. )
And if they have a problem with that, then it's their little sister's faults for acting like total brats, and even their own damn faults for betraying and not trusting Sunset's innocence in the first place.
OH boy looking forward to it and nice work on chapter
Yeah, Male Sunset shouldn't have to worry. He made it big by sharing billions with the Dazzlings. And many more, since the monster girls will get a lot of money too.
nice work
Although, one last thing is Celestia or the Rainbooms will react to all of this, or even get rightfully punished by the monster girls themselves as huge ass karma!
it was good look forward to more
Should I congratulate and give a thumbs up to the actual nice and good males/guys that were once single, and get the very hot, sexy, busty/bimbo, amazon-like monster girls as their GF's/possible future wives?
Or the other guys that are very decent enough to know not to fuck or piss off the clearly tall, and strong monster girls?
It's like dating She-Hulk for example. ( NOT the MCU show of woke version. The classic comics/animation show versions of her. )
You know that you should definitely be on her good side, and not do anything very stupid to piss her, or her own cousin off.
Anyways, here's hoping that the monster girls find a way to rectify that for their new good/nice BF's/future husbands. They got magic and that "lustful scent" after all.
Not make them just as good or even better as Male Sunset. But, twice or three times better than they normally would.
Twilight too? You mean Regular Pony Twilight, or Human/Sci-Twi?
I don't think those two would ever betray Male Sunset like the others. Plus, they would be just as pissed at the betrayal as well.
Do they even have a chance for redemption?
Do they or should they all be "tested" and rightfully punished by the angry/vengeful monster girls themselves?
The CMC is the definite NO-NO!!!! They already deserve what they got in the courts. But by the monster girls!?
They should have standards, since the CMC are under age. You know what mean!?
Personally for me, I should give Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie a chance. Because I don't think they did anything terrible to Sunset besides not "believing" him.
While Rainbow, Applejack and Rarity are a hard choice. They may probably done much worse, or even get physical harm against Sunset.
Oh, and the fact that those three have a connection to those three brats responsible for all of this.
What do you think? Maybe this time, you can gave a version of the Mane Five/Rainbooms a chance for redemption, for once!?
Just like how Male Sunset and the Dazzlings got there's when they quit villainy.
But of course, redemption and getting back trust must be earned!!!!!!! That's when the monster girls themselves come in.
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Human Twilight and she did with everyone else turn against Sunset in the comic
I loved the scene with Rainbow dash, good to see a little karma.
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Why did you make her turn bad like the rest!? She wasn't even there doing that Anon-a-Miss fiasco? Did you jumble up the timeline on purpose, just for this?
She can't be that stupid or dumb enough to think that Male Sunset will do this!? Considering that she was once in a dark path like Male Sunset was too? Why throw a fellow "former villain" under the bus like that!?
Plus, she doesn't have the exact same past like the others in Canterlot High. Since she was from Crystal Prep, why would she be against Sunset, when Sunset didn't even bully her for over 3 years like the rest of them!?
And it's very hypocritical, and makes her no better than the Shadowbolts or even Cinch themselves.
Even if there's a "alternate universe" excuse. What kind of logic is that for someone as "smart" as her to be dumb enough to be fooled by the CMC!!??
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The leaking of secrets takes place after the camping trip so that I could fit Sunset having been to the forest and having his magic back.
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"Leaking of Secrets"? That's a unique way for a "alternate title" for Anon-a-Miss fiasco?
Anyways, even if the events start after Camp Everfree. It doesn't change the fact of my own analysis and opinions that Sci-Twi shouldn't realistically act against Sunset like the others in the first place. ( Please stop ignoring what I said. )
And it is way more f**ked up that the rainbooms still didn't believe him, even after the additional two movies!!??
I hope they lose their pony music power-up, along with their geodes.
Until they successfully redeem themselves that is.
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Twilight the human one is more of a follower than a leader. So she went with her female friends.
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But, Human Twilight is no "follower"? Are you confusing her with Fluttershy?
Fluttershy is more of a "follower mindset" than Human Twilight ever was?
And please, this is the third time I have to say this; Stop ignoring what I just said talking about Sci-Twi, or the potential redemption idea.
I am making a effort to waste my dang time making long comments, detailing about my honest feelings, opinions, and even story suggestions.
But, you either keep ignoring or didn't fully talk about them all!?
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I know but Twilight the human one messed up either way. I can make her sin being inaction as she’s held her tongue and didn’t speak up when it would had matter. But to fit the story already written the friendship needs to be broken.
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Her redemption can be done but I’m not the kind to just let her say sorry and be forgiven, not for not helping when it would had matter. Like I give you a bucket to use to put out a fire long after your house has burned down.
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Alright, I can now accept that.
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I did say that redemption and getting trust back must. be. earned! AND ALL the Monster Girls will personally test them. And you know what I mean.
I did say this before, IF you actually read though my long comments. You would know that?
Personally, I can give Sci-Twi, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie a chance. We all know those three didn't do anything that really terrible to Male Sunset.
And say what you will about your personal hatred of Pinkie Pie in general. But this is human Pinkie, not pony Pinkie.
I still have somewhat of a soft spot for her. And she could have a potential to finally be better.
That's just called character development!!!! The thing that Hasbro Writer's didn't do much, or even regress it on purpose, just for the episode's plot sake.
As for Human Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash? You should clearly know how I feel about those three in my previous long comment.
They will have a wwwwwwaaaaaaayyyyyy harder time then the first three, for getting forgiveness and trust out of Male Sunset.
And you could probably have the Monster Girls girls do whatever they want to those last three, because they kind of deserve it for not being better big sisters in the first place.
nice work looking forward to more of this
nice work
Yep, sucks for them ( The Human Six/Rainbooms ).
Now technically, the CMC would have all the time in the world with their big sisters.
nice work
nice work
That's why we have "porn/hentai logic".
Anyways, where is the story's direction gonna take us? Or you sadly ran out of ideas and just have Male Sunset that have awesome sex all day?
Personally, I like to see what the heck are the Rainbooms, CMC, and CHS are doing? How do they react with all the Monster Girls? Do the Monster Girls/Dazzlings themselves finally give karmic retribution to them all for what they did to Male Sunset as of yet?
And do we even see Pony Twilight yet, and does she know what's going on here?
nice work
Thanks for showing some of the Rainbooms on what their are doing.
They really need to EARN all the trust back with LOTS of work with their actions, not their words after all.
And then is the other "players"; Jupiter and the Shadowbolts.
So, that's why I did heavily suggested having both the Monster Girls, the Dazzlings, and Trixie EACH test them all IF they really want Sunset back, and NOT just because he is a Stud with a huge "package" and high stamina.
( Although, does it sound a bit hypocritical? Considering how the Monster Girls do keep having sex with him 24/7? But actually do care about him? )
So what's your opinion IF any of the Rainbooms have the slightest chance to finally earn Sunset's trust back? It's called redemption and character development after all.
Then there is Juniper and the Shadowbolts to think about.
BTW, I know that the CMC are getting sued or even imprisoned. But, do they get extra karma by the Monster Girls/Dazzlings/Trixie for what those three brats did to Sunset?
OR are they still too young to get "punished"!?
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The brats aren’t showing up at all. I’m going with reform school for them.
As for the monster girls yes they have sex with Sunset anytime he wants and lavished and cater to him. This is a hentai harem story after all.