Inspired by the song of the same name by the Silversun Pickups.
All she needs is a shoulder to cry on. A friend, to listen, to understand, to comfort her.
And that's what Derpy's getting, right?
Or is it?
Is it enough to act like a friend?
This is the true test of a good friend. Can Derpy do what she knows is right? Or will she succumb to her torn emotions?
What is the right thing to do?
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Yes! This is what I've been looking for: a good
story that actually has proper grammar, a storyline that makes sense, and is nice and long. 
*you rock! woohoo.*
Great work! Wish there was more though, I crave it!
>Reading through, reach end >Oh wow what an amazing introduction chapter, can't wait to see more! >Completed
We are like Dr. Weird's ass.
We hunger... FOR MOAR.
Why do I keep finding really good fics that just make me a sad pony?
I demand MORE!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
NEED MOAR!!!!!!
.....Opppsss
.......While I decry your spamming, I admire your enthusiasm>>96328
did... did you just ship rainbow dash and ditzy? I need to think over this... ok, approved.
I do like the characterization here, Ditzy has had it rough in alot of her fics, she is depicted as disabled mentally far too often. I have a lazy eye myself, its mostly corrected but every once in a while when I get really tired it drifts, it can make reading eye straining because your eyes don't want to focus on the same thing. I can't help but think if she had glasses it could be corrected.
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Thank you very much! I'm glad ya like it!
(And thanks for checking out my other story while you were at!)
Really, thank you to everypony who's checked this out so far! I really, really never expected such a positive turnout!
i agree, MOAR
Lazy Eye is one of the best songs I've ever listened to (next to Well Thought Out Twinkles), and I love the band. Let's see how this story goes.
I was going to post a comment about how it got featured and stuff, but I'll probably go all nuts on you in the chat and stuff. So I'll see ya later :D
Man, I gotta say I loved the story
The end though nailed me hard and almost made me cry. You have a great way with words, you know how to write, and best of all you know how to make a great plot. I hope to see more work from you in the future.
I wasn't going to comment because Its not really my thing, but then I saw this as completed. HELL NO!!!! You must write more so Ditzy and Rainbow Dash can live happily ever after! I command you to!
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You did a wonderful job describing each moment and how Ditzy felt. I'm, tracking this!
5/5 from me, sir. Bravo!
Awesome job, there just isn't enough quality derpy shipping stories. But please continue this story, you can't just leave us hanging like that!
i need to know if what rainbow felt was real or not!!!!!!!!!!! write moar!!!!!!
its good :D
awesome too
The herd demands Moar.
Just a little MOAR so we can find out if dash was herself!!
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR
im gonna track this, and i had better see an update soon, or im gonna tell celestia youve been a bad ponie.
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If I may suggest a follow-up song, I heartily recommend "I Need A Sequel So I Don't Have To Feel Bad Every Time I Read A Really Good Ditzy Story (Canterlot Remix)" by Dropkick Murphys. Featuring David Bowie.
...Totally legit, by the way.
Im sorry about this, but yeah. It is my duty as your hipster friend to do so. Okay, here goes...
I READ THIS BEFORE IT WAS POSTED HERE.
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97580 damn hipsters...
The story say complete.
This better be a mistake.
more....more! moremoremoarmoarmoarMOARMOARMOAR!!!!!!! This was WAY to good to be a one shot story, and i graciously demand more to sate my newly provoked hunger for this amazing story
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WRITE MORE OF THIS I CURRENTLY HAVE A PATHOLOGICAL NEED TO COMFORT DERPY
also 97648 http://thepunchlineismachismo.com/archives/540
Only one bad thing... the ending. MOAR!!!
ill read but only cause i like the silversun pickups
Yeah... I'm gonna track this. I'm expecting this to get an update. Don't fail me.
Ah.. I think your mouse has malfunctioned, because this story says "Complete" on it. Go get your mouse fixed dude.
I found this to be a very pleasant, if saddening story. Kudos to you for writing a ship I had not, in my personal experience, seen yet. I am hoping that you will write another chapter after that cliffhanger of an ending
Srsly, guys, I think no more need be written. It is up to the reader to fill in what happens afterward.
That aside, great story. The world needs more Derpy love.
This was an incredibly good read. This story better not be completed yet! It's far too great to just end it right now (Okay, NOW I say what most others are saying). MOAR!
However, I can understand if you wish to leave it like this. The ending sort of has that "Complete but yet incomplete" feeling, which makes many shorter stories great after you get over the fact having MOAR was simply not an option or meant to be.
That being said, I can now give you this massive amount of stars I can barely hold on to.
Some people want a second chapter, but I really think the selected ending was the best way to finish strong (even if it was really sad.).
Poor Derpy, the story just makes me tear
You have clearly illustrated the story of Derpy's life in one chapter. This chapter should be sufficient to round up the whole story anyway so people who are demanding seconds, don't be greedy
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