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Count_Pony001


Hello, I am Count_Pony001. I like to write and draw. I am also a Christan. May God bless you today.

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On her way to deliver mail to Zecora, Derpy got attacked by a vampire, and now she became a vampire, turned evil and now wants to suck everypony's blood.

Edited By: Nebbie

Thank You God for helping me write this.

Credit for the coverart:
Cover image made by Nebbie; wingless Derpy vector by thatusualguy06, surprised Twilight head by tomfraggle, and prone Twilight by littlehybridshila

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Who's Zakora? Did you mean Zecora?

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Yeah, the zebra that talks in rhythm. (Not trying to be rude or anything)

how about S.B. before a Vampony as well, and makes A.B. and Scoot become Vamponies as well

Dinky looks for her mom
and that's how Derpy stops and changes back

the ask Fluttershy to become FullterBAT

the dead comes back as zombies

the knight is made of silver

Celestian sun-hits derpy



p.s. edit this reminds me of this

This...could've done with an editing pass. Like, Derpy getting bitten is the inciting incident of the whole story, but...

Before the vampire can reply to my question, the vampire bit me on her keck and suck some of my red blood and left in a blink of an eye, she then disappeared.

should really be

Instead of replying to my question, she bit me on the neck and sucked out some of my blood, then in a blink of an eye, she disappeared.

A sequel might be interesting, but honestly...this fic really could do with basic cleanup before putting out something that someone would need to read this to get the story behind. I could help edit it if you're up for it.

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Sure. How do I do thart?

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Well at its most basic, it'd just be me pointing things out and providing text suggestions, us then discussing it, and then you using the "Edit" button on chapters to update their text.
I'll send you a PM to discuss further, so as to not clog up the story's comment section.

Hello Count_Pony, I reviewed this story and you can find it here.

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