On her way to deliver mail to Zecora, Derpy got attacked by a vampire, and now she became a vampire, turned evil and now wants to suck everypony's blood.
Edited By: Nebbie
Thank You God for helping me write this.
Credit for the coverart:
Cover image made by Nebbie; wingless Derpy vector by thatusualguy06, surprised Twilight head by tomfraggle, and prone Twilight by littlehybridshila
Who's Zakora? Did you mean Zecora?
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Yeah, the zebra that talks in rhythm. (Not trying to be rude or anything)
how about S.B. before a Vampony as well, and makes A.B. and Scoot become Vamponies as well
Dinky looks for her mom
and that's how Derpy stops and changes back
the ask Fluttershy to become FullterBAT
the dead comes back as zombies
the knight is made of silver
Celestian sun-hits derpy
p.s. edit this reminds me of this
i.pinimg.com/736x/9c/e6/5a/9ce65aaad2ec22427374184f775722f9--strip-comic.jpg
This...could've done with an editing pass. Like, Derpy getting bitten is the inciting incident of the whole story, but...
should really be
A sequel might be interesting, but honestly...this fic really could do with basic cleanup before putting out something that someone would need to read this to get the story behind. I could help edit it if you're up for it.
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Sure. How do I do thart?
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Well at its most basic, it'd just be me pointing things out and providing text suggestions, us then discussing it, and then you using the "Edit" button on chapters to update their text.
I'll send you a PM to discuss further, so as to not clog up the story's comment section.
Hello Count_Pony, I reviewed this story and you can find it here.