Best friends Noah, Tyler, Adam and Andre find themselves in Ponyville. In this world of bright colorful equines and minimal adherence to the laws of science and reality, they must make their way home. Or, you know, dick around.
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Decent. Editing needs to be done, mostly on flow.
Also is this really co authored 4 ways?
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Yes it is. And what about the flow? Is it jagged? I ask you to look a little closer and see if it is because of the plotline, or if it's the different writing styles, as that is the problem that four amateur writers need to overcome, that is, making it smooth while taking advantage of different writing styles.
i like it
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Thanks for the feedback, we really appreciate it and hope you will enjoy our future chapters
ohhh sweet Celestia i'm laughing my ass off at you guys. you guys are just too hilarious
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wow thanks, Im glad we could entertain you, though all of the credit should go to Noah, hes the funny one in our group
1375232 You guys are all equally funny though some are more amusing than others but it is nice to sit down and read a funny story to lighten the day
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What part did you like the best? I need to know what was good and what wasn't.
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thanks for the comment, really glad you enjoyed it, wish i could come up with something more creative thwn a simple thankyou, but noahs the comedy author of our group
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You are very welcome, and I must say that you have made my night. Thank you for your feedback, and also remember this: I might be the comedy, but Tyler does the story, so without him this would be a jumbled mess of Internet memes.
...moar pls
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Working on it. The next few chapters are gonna take awhile as we're all busy with school, work, and music and stuff. Sorry about that.
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I apolagize as well, my work schedual really gets in the way of writing, we hope to have two chapters up by the end of next week though, again, sorry about the delay
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indeed, and have we mentioned we love making you guys laugh?
finally! good lines in here
Absence of logic?
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Is there a problem with the title?
1471017 No... more just a....
I will get back to you on that... or some psycho will instead...
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just the name we came up with
1471058I figured.... Like i said, some psycho might talk to you... And possibly leave a.... message.
I'm not complaining. I like it.
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What psycho? If there's an actual problem I would appreciate it if you'd tell us about it or whatever and not be cryptic about it. Sorry to ruin the fun.
1471099No, there isn't a problem at all! And I unfortunately must be cryptic about it... It's sort of an agreement i have with him. And it's also my thing. *shrugs* But there's nothing to worry about at all! in fact, you can probably forget about all this.
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Right. Well, then, a fine evening to yourself good sir.
1471143Of course sirs. It has been an honor speaking with such internet fluent bronies such as yourselves!
oh, good chapter
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thanks, im glad you enjoyed it. We're hoping to get deeper into the story in the next few chapters, now if you'll excuse me. I have a game of Dark Souls to get back to, have a wonderful evening
that spoiler leaves more questions than answers....
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Don't worry bro, in due time everything will make sense, and we'll be your new gods.
You guys are Gods?
woah that must be pretty cool
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Well, it's a bit more complicated than that. See, we're not gods in that sense. We're gods in the same way Morgan Freeman is a god. That is, we have complete control over everything in the universe and beyond.
1479116 thats some wicked stuff there
1479830 they must of got tired of relying on Ben alone
1481659 yeah first time on the job sir not too used to all the crazy stuff out there
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I have no idea what is going on here, to me it is just total randomness.
Continue.
i do believe maybe is spelled maybe and not mabay unless i'm the one who is wrong which would be totally fine.
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you're most likely right, me and Noah were kinda rushing to finish this chapter so we may have missed some errors, thanks for pointing it out
1701440 always glad to help and i want to watch you guys livestream i haven't been able to the other times
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Wow, really? OK, I got one for you. How would you like to see me torture myself with the greatest, most maddening adventure ever created? That's right, I am speaking of the dreaded Water Temple from Ocarina of Time.
i'm totally game but i want to see you scream at Slender that would be fun.
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HA! you wanna watch him scream? Watch him play Amnesia for an hour, its one of the funniest things to see, its like he has mini seizures every few minutes
1705625 Oh God... i cringed at the trailer for that game.
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Finally, the quest, it is finished and I may now feast in the halls of Valhalla
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Fixed.
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I'm bored.
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Indeed. That's why you're our favorite pony.
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Yeah we know. I am pretty sure I know what killed us though. When I went through and revised some of the earlier chapters I found SO many horrible mistakes. I believe that the mistakes just killed potential readers. But it could also be because we're huge pony-loving faggots. I don't really know.
I have no idea where I am right now, why are these keyboards not made for hooves?
I have to say I've been thoroughly entertained by this fic. I await future chapters.