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On Scootaloo's 12th birthday, she recieve the greatest gift of all: adoption papers from her greatest idol, Rainbow Dash. She was very enthusiastic about living with Rainbow, and now she is in High School, has her Cutie Mark, and has become highly proficient at flying. However, she still has to deal with the typical High Schoolers problems. Typical, right?

SEQUEL TO Dreams Do Come True. I HEAVILY SUGGEST READING IT FIRST!

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 57 )

Wow, why did someone can hate this story ? It`s AweSOME )

Epic! Can't wait for what happens next!

:pinkiecrazy: MUHAHAHA you made my insanity worse :pinkiehappy: thank you for that

better than i thought it would be cant wait for the next part

what could rainbow dash have done that was so terrible? she's Rainbow Dash!

Please continue

1546672 i was kidding, i don't hate it

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Well that's good but it was still not the actual ending. And it's good to know that you are liking it. :pinkiesmile:

You need an editor and you need to slow the story down. Your court case was like two paragraphs.

Make those ponies suffer for taking away Scootaloo

1547053
Hahaha sorry about that, I'm impatient, but I'll work on it.

1547215
Pacing is a hard thing. My fic has serious troubles with it but I was never a talented writer.

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, i hope this gets better

okay but here is a plus in the legal system, there allowed an apeal, appeal to princess luna, legaly she can do that

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SSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! DON'T LET THEM KNOW THAT! :pinkiecrazy:

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! :fluttercry:

I`ll ra.. and then kill this judging bi...witch !!!

I wanted to cry when they took Scootaloo away. This is wonderful, please continue.

Really good I hope to see more.:scootangel:

I'm liking the story so far, and this chapter was great.

One thing that got me though, every time someone said ok, it was in caps. It just kind of makes me feel like everyone was yelling the whole time, I think it should only be in caps when they are actually yelling. Other than that, it was really good.

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Yeah, sorry about that, Chrome puts a red line under it and my OCD won't let me leave it as it is. I hope you understand.

Can we have the old as a bonus maybe?:fluttershysad:

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I'm afraid I don't understand.

1573584 never mind i might have confused this story with another similar one, a scapped chapter where Rainbow died.

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No this is that one, but I erased it after Adam accidentally published it. Sorry bro. :fluttercry:

I'm enjoying this story. :yay:

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I am SOOOOOO glad to hear that!

Good read hope to see more.:scootangel:

wow Rainbow's reaction to all of this feels so right, also I see much pain being visited upon someone shortly.

BUCK THE LEGAL SYSTEM KILL ALL THE GUARDS :rainbowdetermined2::flutterrage::twilightangry2::pinkiecrazy::raritycry::ajbemused: oh and by the way i like the pick at the end

oh man shit just got real :rainbowdetermined2:

Dark times ahead:rainbowdetermined2:

Awesome!!!!:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

P.S. First

The circle of life is ironic in its vengeance, you must be careful what you do with yourself.

So, Came here to add this to my read later list because I Absolutely love Scootaloo and Dash stories (If you can't tell from my profile, lol) So full of D'awwww...

But....I was looking at this, and I don't know where to begin, I could begin with chapter one cause its at the top of the list, but.....there is a prologue...and those come before chapter one....I dunno if you meant epilogue or if its a prologue that was added after the story was finished but meant to be before.....I'm so confused...

Other than that, it looks like its gonna be a good story, the perfect light read for the cold winter nights ahead of me! :twilightsmile:

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AHHHHHH you are absolutely right, I meant epilogue. I ALWAYS confuse the two, sorry about that. :derpytongue2:

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No need to apologize, I just wanted to make sure I read it all in the correct order, didn't want to spoil the story for myself is all :twilightsmile:

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Yes, well, I fixed it. WOOHOO! NO MORE CONFUSION :D

Good story! I just have two opinions on possible changes:

I think Scootaloo should be calling Dash "Mom" instead of "Mommie". The term seemed way to childish in the story.

And Strongwing gets 10 years? Isn't that a little harsh? It just seems that the same thing is now happening to her and her son. I just figured it would have balanced out somehow.

Just my thoughts. Take 'em or leave 'em.

many manly tears of joy were shed this day :pinkiesad2:

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I have reasons for both. Let us just leave it at that. However, I am grateful that you care enough to leave a comment.

DAMN THAT BITCH STRONGWING!!!
Also manly *damn* tears are shed

I read the first fiction a little while back, and I'm delighted it has a sequel! I'll be reading through this tonight and tomorrow. Good job sir!

Great story! I'm gonna take a wild ass guess here, and say there's gonna be a third!:rainbowwild:

I feel the next sequel will be a lot more dark.

Good job on this story, keep up the good work!

NOOOOO!!!!!
I mean, I respect you for acknowledging the fact that story needs to have a good conflict,
but... WHY?!:raritydespair:

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Because you touch yourself at night.

YES!!!!
I friggin' LOVE happy endings!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

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