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A good start! I look forward to the next chapter :)
The kind of confidence I expect from a stallion with a paid off mortgage.
Great job mate can't wait for the next one this definitely seems it's going to be a cute story
Hitch is not mincing words also bending the rules he really wants this date to go well doesn't he
Why are ratings disabled?
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I do that for my stories that get downvote-bombed.
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Well i upvote it! Kinda felt it was a little short tho.
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Thanks for reading. Sorry it wasn't longer. Maybe next time.
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Don't be sorry :D I meant longer as in a little more detail in the sex scene. I liked what I read with the setup and all, it's just a personal opinion thing after reading other works and one small act (let's say, a thrust) is stretched into...I don't know, a paragraph? It gives a little more visualization and I get to enjoy it more. Unlike some stories I read that had only two paragraphs of the action while the rest was some rushed wordding to setup the story. I like the scenes to be very descriptive especially with m/m since there isn't a ton of it. But that's just my personal preference. But like I said, I did enjoy it!