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Thought Prism


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Daring Do turns up a lead on an artifact stolen years ago, but the culprit is not someone she expects to meet: her future life partner, a mare more than wild enough to keep up.

An entry into Bicyclette's Crackshipping Contest. Coverart by nazonazopowerfu.

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Not a bad story, but I came up with an insult despite it not being horrible and just wanted to share it.

Is it called Crackshipping because you would have to be on crack to enjoy it.

Cue the U-Haul jokes? I did not think they were supposed to be taken quite this literally.

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I mean... Yeah, pretty much. Though more "to come up with it" than "to enjoy it."

Who in their right mind would think to pair Mr. Cake with Fleetfoot, for example? Only somebody on crack.

I'm always up for seeing background humans get a bit of the spotlight. Delightfully bizarre pairing, and quite a bit of fun flirtation. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.

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To be fair none of my dumb crack fix of which I've written like 120 I think I have been written on cocaine mostly because cocaine is overpriced and doesn't get you high of that long I've probably written a few on meth though but only when I'm out of ADHD medication and have money because they hit me the same because they're both amphetamines oh shit I overshared again

Some investigation had turned up a name: Violet Blurr, one of the famous Photo Finish's most valued assistants in lighting and makeup, credited in numerous publications.

def a very necessary line, since otherwise i would have no idea who this mare is!

Oh Celestia, that was way too forward, no way I can write that in.

dang, Daring Do is bad at her job

The puzzle-solving archeologist part of my brain put together in the background that this was why her dress had such a long train, so other ponies wouldn't step on the hidden extent of her true form.

good detail!

Damn irrational phobia; why did it always have to be snakes!?

pop culture reference!


well, the meta-comment on the speed with which this moved definitely brought to mind the earlier meta-comment on the story being of perhaps a different sort of genre fiction! and this is certainly a way to make lamia ponies canon. and Daring Do is a good counterpart here between the fun to be had from the Indiana Jones reference and one-off species being her wheelhouse. thanks for writing!

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