Destiny or chaos, I wouldn't know the reason, but for some reason my life had a clean slate.
Now I am Wizbell Star, a little colt with great desires to explore magic and this new place full of Ponies?
Here the magic is real, not a delirium, not a visual falsehood, it is tangible!! I can do magic, study it, understand it, a small childish desire comes back to give me a purpose to live.
Now I am not just another cog in a society that tries to get money for tomorrow without any ambition or purpose beyond surviving.
For the first time... I am living.
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I will add the tags during the course of the story because I'm not sure whether to add some of them or not, so I will only add them when I have some content that supports having them.
A good start in my eyes, and I will certainly return for the coming chapters.
Stay strong Sukuna you are strong-jogoat
I don’t know why but when I read this chapter all I think of is one word, “MORE.”
In other words, he lacked a Spirit. Or maybe a Soul. Or both.
As opposed to Psychokinesis?
Let's gooo ! I want him to become an eccentric archmage !
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Telekinesis = Magic
Psychokinesis = Esper
I see the second one more as a skill that's use full mind, a sobrenatural power [Esper]
Meanwhile Telekinesis could be the same, but their fount is the magic but that is just my interpretation.
I find this story very amusing; Light-hearted and Excited; are words I'd describe it. The interactions are 'hearty', and the content is expected for the everyday pony, but I find the way it's written with a certain sense of wonder to be most captivating. The character is excited about the world and all it has to offer, much like a child with a colorful imagination and bright sight everything would take in, and part of this fantasy is imprinted onto the reader, at least my observation so far. It kind of reminds me of one of the first human in Equestria stories I read on this site, where every single aspect was met with such wonder, this really gives me a taste of nostalgia.
T: it thould altho (should also) be noted that Earth Ponieth (Ponies) have more fine control of their maneth and tailth (manes and tails).
Lmao bro is an unending well of magic power.
Writing 4
Characters 4 - But a little bit more of development and they would be fine.
Rhythm 3.5 (Is a bit slow)
Enjoyable 4
Don't take my comments too seriously I know how hard it is to write something so just go to your rhythm it's amazing how are you doing by now.
That sounds half healthy, really. If it's dark chocolate, it's rich in antioxidants and all sorts of good stuff. And bananas are also packed with nutrients, like potassium, vitamin C and B6 and Magnesium.
The marshmallows I can't speak for, however.
Equestrian nobles have absolutely no concept of noblesse oblige. Seriously.
Uh-oh! You just triggered him!
Might want to learn a shield spell next.
I like the story so far, Keep it up
He should become a Chad Wizard lmao.
Muscled carved like marble, take great care of his body (coat and all), an absolute genius in magic !
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I second this! author make this happen
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I can't wait to see how Wizbell does great on his magic along with seeing your upcoming chapters, and remember:
Keep your dreams alive. Understand that achieving anything requires faith and belief in yourself, vision, hard work, determination, and dedication. Remember all things are possible for those who believe.
Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy!
https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU?si=B-ePfklmnJvFCmoh
Really, I would think it would be closer to psychokinesis.
One of my favourite stories on this site has Twilight pegged as a mega-chocoholic. Once or twice she's basically force fed a Death By Chocolate muffin, which immediately relaxes her completely.
Heh, Celly's so fat her presence is suffocating.
She need to lay off the cake lmao.
Thanks for the chapters ! Can't wait to see more !
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Bro😭😭😭
Another good chapter, Keep up the great work man!
Quite the set of lungs on her for that age.
That's quite the run-on sentence.
Say what you will, he knows how to take the hint with grace.
Better yet: explain Minotaurs.
I am pretty sure that that's a lyre, not a harp. There's a difference.
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Thanks, in the rush I forgot to research that.
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Good inspiration material, I can already imagine a scene with Twilight suffering from an OCD attack where Pinkie Pie can calm her down with an ultra-special magical chocofantastic muffin.
You really need to do something about all those typos.
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Well, that was from
- MLP: FiM
- Romance
- Comedy
- Drama
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An Esper, aka Psychokinesis, is the ability to use your mental will to overpower reality's perception. because atoms exist as a cloud of possibility until viewed, like light, then when it is observed the atoms wave function collapses on a point where the atom is. A Esper is someone whos' observation is more powerful than anyone else, thus there observation overrides anyone else, thus they can manipulate matter by changing where the atoms wavefunction collapses.
A mage with magic is more akin to using raw energy, aka mana, as a hard light construct to move things.
Im getting confused, fingers? I thought he was a pony? Im getting confufled
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If I read correctly they are pony human hybrids made by discord they have fur and everything that a normal pony has but are bipedal and have hands