[Hiatus or most Abandoned]
Abandoned history.
-Milestones to achieve by the OC:
//Ability to fully predict Everfree's weather
//Overcome a second sound barrier.
//Affect the weather with only emotions
//Tune with the weather, know if a place needs rain or hot seasons, etc.
//*Optional, Make him an Alicorn with control over the world's weather, dedicate himself to helping the small factions without Pegasus to control the weather, as something cliché I was inclined not to do.
Defects:
OC too robot, monotonous like almost everything.
Sorry for explaining some things too much, but that's who I am, I enjoy investigating the reasons for things and I tend to explain them... like now.
I had several ideas for this story, but they are all loose ideas with nothing to tie them together so I never focused on any of them or gave them a real or general purpose.
Being your best version, a small wish of mine that I imposed in writing, that's what this story was.
Many ideas come to me over time but I don't put them into action.
So many things I want to do, but without energy and time to do it, that caused the decline of publishing more chapters mainly.
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Death from stress during work hours.
Reincarnated as a small cyan pegasus with a mane of two tones of blue, the darkest being the base with a fringe of a much lighter tone, his appearance gave his name.
Storm Flash... a little pegasus from Canterlot.
Now, this is my story of how I became in... I don't know.
Just follow me and see how I try to achieve something great to never again be someone insignificant who was not satisfied with his previous life.
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Featured:
08/[27->31]/21
09/05/21
09/14/21
09/24/21
11/27/21
12/03/2021
01/29/2022
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Binnacle - 17 Years since I was here and wrote my thoughts:
I managed to find my goal, it is to be a Pegasus without equal, to be able to alter the weather just with a flap of my wing without being in the sky, to master the art of controlling the clouds or as I like to call it Cloudbender.
I have managed to make a Sonic Boom thanks to all my training... but it was not my final goal not least when it took me 10 years to achieve it when a 8 year old Rainbow Dash achieved it when we were in the Young Aviators school.
But now I am very distracted by the Everfree forest and the challenges it can impose on my path, Everfree will be the forge where I will temper my skills to achieve my dream.
Joining the Wonderbolts... no thanks, I will be recognized for my accomplishments, not for the clothes I wear over my fur!
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Some time has passed and now I am the Bearer of a strange magical element that seems to be slowly affecting me ... the good thing is that it is in a positive way.
Also, my training has had its results, now I can clear the sky by just flapping among other things, but the most memorable thing is that I can be the center of climate changes, something that I discovered by accident when consuming a drug, now my attention is focused in replicating those phenomena and then mastering them.
The Everfree is no longer as chaotic or random as I thought at first, it is similar to Earth in a certain way, but only 5% because the rest of the difference is caused by the magical phenomenons that abound in that forest.
Another bit of news is that now I have friends who bring me a smile when I remember them, but I still haven't lost my features as a Deviant, but I'm worried about what Celestia plans for me, now that she knows that I'm not in the army with the others Deviant.
Same things happened to me before...
Good God I hate when it happens.
nice chapter dude, i hope you continue writing on this story since in my opinion it has a lot of potential so i hope you have a good time in writing!!
nice chapter dude, hope you keep up the good work!!
apart from the (very) few grammar mistakes i saw, the story seems to be promising.
i agree with yonalkaru
(Reads description)
I think that kind of death is called "Karoshi".
A human becoming a pony and having adventures?
Count me in.
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9+3 = 12
5+3 = 8
12+8 = 20
The judge is bought
Cloudblender?
I think you mean cloudbender without the L....
in my opinion i like how you did Derpy's character, also i wonder what plans you have for the story, you should take you're time with writing it but nevertheless this is a great chapter!!
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Withdrawn.
To quote DWK on The Fault in our Cutie Marks,
I think that's called 'hovering'.
Presumably Mach 10 or so.
Sure sounds like there's at least one thing.
Interesting story so far, I hope there will be more of a plot involved in the story, keep it up.
now this is getting interesting, i cant wait for this story to continue!!!!!
I like it, continue with your great work in this fic !!!
They're still around, though.
https://cheezburger.com/5890622208
Wait, does this mean there are two pegasi who can do the rainboom?
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Sonic Boom - Yes
Sonic Rainboom - No
The harmony did not help Flash to achieve the Sonic Boom so it is not the same.
Rainbow Dash's first SB is special as it determines the entire timeline, fate makes sure it is, while Flash trained to achieve it.
The Sonic Rainboom belongs to Rainbow Dash, Flash's SB is different from his way.
i love this story allot and cant wait to see where it goes.
For the love of Celestia, mare! Take a breath!
Pinks, you're waifu for life-u, but seriously!
#Hottakeoff
#zoomzoom
Entering Challenge Phase. Head 'em up; Move 'em out! Power stride; And ready to ride.
Paraphrasing from the Saner Rider and the Star Sheriffs series Ramrod transformation sequence. I... felt that the words fit, dor some reason.
To quote from The Magical World,
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Also, if that were effectively a 'rainboom', he'd have been going at about mach 5 already.
Seeing his name I wonder if Flash Sentry might be a sibling, cousin or uncle? Who are is family members?
By they way is he really reincarnated filly/girl and is now a mare/woman? Or did you mean he is a foal/child and that he is a colt/boy and that he is at this point a stallion/male?
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from what I can gather about pronouns they are a He/Him in both lives.
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He is a stallion
This filly is Rainbow not him.
Maybe I wrote that wrong
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Sorry at times it sounded that you confused 'foal' with 'filly' by the way I read it at times
Pretty neat story so far.
pretty sure you meant Rainbow Crash. As far as I know, rainbow isn't that rich.
Not a bad chapter, good content, though it definitely shows that some of it had to be rewritten. I noticed a couple typos/formatting issues.
After the page break where the text got centered, it didn't get realigned to the left.
I've noticed that phrase a couple times, and I've never heard it before. "Take helmets" sounds like something got lost in translation.
Otherwise, the direction this story is headed looks good.
Not bad. The story itself it great, but definitely needs an editor to look over it. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, I can definitely tell you've put some thought into how the magic and physics of this work.
Author's Note:
😖 It didn't save what I wrote!!!
More than half of what I wrote was lost... NOO!!
Writing it while I got inspired is not the same as trying to recreate it
I can feel you ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
Now what do we call this? This is not a sonic rainboom
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That's just an alternate universe making itself known
Intriguing.
I said it before, I'll say it again: For the love of Celestia, take a breath!
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Make me!... I always wanted to say that... hey where am I? that's me?!
Was fluttershy not a part of their friend circle when they were smaller? It feels like he meets her for the first time now
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Flash was very distracted as a child and if he got to know about Fluttershy, but no more, he just knew that she was the filly that couldn't fly like the others, they weren't friends, just acquaintances.
I like this, very fun to read.
Wanna bet that filly is scootaloo?
Wait a minute... how come Cloud hasn't met Dash yet? I mean they monitored the weather of the same town, right? Despite different area, but Ponyville should not be so big that they haven't interacted with each other at all.
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Cloud Kicker
Cloud chaser
Which one?
Flash is patrolling southeast Ponyville while Dash is west near Sweet Apple Acres, the other half of PonyVille.
Unless you meant to say that he was being supported from above, as in he washanging from a wire or something, and being moved around at great speed by something else, you need to change verbs here. "Suspend" has some specific meanings, and "to fly" isn't one of them.
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Thanks, sometimes I forget that English is very specific.
That said, hit it!
They'll just have to wait for Zap Apple season instead.