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This story is a sequel to I'm normal, Twilight!


Since Twilight stopped worrying about Alex's behavior, his life in Equestria has gotten a little better. No, the ponies still can't pronounce his name correctly. But overall it's not bad

Until today, when Twilight and Spike have to go to Canterlot for some reason. They didn't dare leave fifteen-year-old Alex at home alone (They did the right thing). And the only one who agrees to take him in for a couple of nights is Applejack. Unfortunately for Alex, this pony doesn't really like the one thing about him that she plans to fix.

His fear of working.

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Comments ( 8 )

To be fair, laziness is not a reason. It's an excuse. Applejack would probably let Alex off if he was too hurt or sick (since I don't think even she is that stubborn anymore), but sure as hell not like this.

And that's just from the description. This should be fun.

Gotta admit, his methods are genial

Yea but what was the worm for??????

I might recommend a proofreading. Some parts are phrased oddly, such that I question if English is your first language - Not that that's an issue, mind, just that things are phrased differently in different languages. Also "Appledeck" towards the end. Not bad otherwise.

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Initially, Alex's plan was different and implied a worm. But then I remembered that it was winter and there was another plan. I was just too lazy to cut out a few paragraphs with a worm.

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First of all, thanks for the comment! Secondly, no, English is not my first language.

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Same bro 🤜

And funny story 😉

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