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Jack Hanna got into Equestria not so long ago. But all this time he remained himself. A cold titan who lives with only one goal: to become stronger. But he only talks to one pony regularly. Rainbow Dash. It was she who not only impressed him with her speed, but also doesn't seem to pay much attention to his size and strength, which frighten most ponies.

It seems like today is the most ordinary day that Jack will spend working out to exhaustion again. This is partly true, but one feeling bothers him when he looks at Rainbow.

A feeling he had never experienced before. But the strongest of all.


This is my first story that even tries to be romantic, so I would really like to get constructive criticism.

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Comments ( 6 )

That was surprisingly... awesome, especially for a person like jack:moustache:

This honestly the first time A fic caught my attention with a baking character! I don't think dashie would be able to handle Jack though.😈

At least it wasn't Yujiro. Equestria would be screwed. Literally.

I haven't read this but holy shit, Baki representation on this site! I love it.

omg this is so cute. i’ve been binge watching baki shorts lately

Pachi #6 · March 7th · · ·

Remember, clapping cheeks canonically makes you stronger in the Bakiverse, so this is also a form of training

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