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I like that art style. I’m convinced every story with a different cover art style is a completely different Leech, like a Leech Cinematic Universe.
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The LCU?
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Exactly!
Sexy time!!
I'm gonna be honest. I tried to read this, but I'm a professional editor and the over- and misuse of italics every few words gave me conniptions. I didn't even get into the embassy.
Well she looks very pleased on the cover
You published it! At long last!!!
Hate to be that guy but since no one else has seen fit to do so I guess I will.
I’m not sure what you were going for here but “dubious investing” usually means bad investments, rather than sketchy investments, or investments of questionable morality and/or legality.
The locomotive is what pulls the train. Unless she gave the engineer some fun for a free ride, she’d be getting off a passenger car or coach. (I think the latter’s usage is primarily for the UK and Commonwealth, while the former is US. Which one to use is whether the train Leech took was on a railway or railroad. UK uses railway, US railroad.)
Alternatively, she may have gotten off a dining car or observation car, or even a Pullman car (though this would be highly unlikely since Pullmans were both fancy/expensive and were for trips long enough to need beds).
However, if she was budgeting she’d probably not have had access to the Observation car, and even if she’d eaten on the Dining car (since multiple railroads ran these, and before, brick-and-mortar restaurants, at a loss to help entice travelers, she probably did. Seriously you could get a 4 or 5 star quality steak for, like, $20 or $25 in today’s money. ), her getting off from there wouldn’t make much sense since she’d need to get her luggage.
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Loved It~ Thanks, Leech! Reading this has gotten me through every break i've had for work today. You never fail to impress!
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Glad you like it
Are you making the cover artworks yourself? Or you have somebody to make it? Or even more people? I must know!
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They list who makes the cover art in almost every summary. This one was made by Sugarless Paints.
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Sugarless made this one
It's not uncommon that I use proceeds from commissions to commission covers/art
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Cool :D
This was a fun story. Not just as a clopfic, but for a happy ending for this version of Leech.
This is one of your best stories, damn I really like this couple.
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Thanks!
I may write more with them someday!
That's still phrased to imply they were risky or bad investments. You need to phrase it in a way that emphasizes that these were questionable or dubious for moral or legal reasons, not that they weren't likely to make her money. "...windfall of bits from some investing that...well, the less said the better. It's been a pretty questionable affair at best, but she wasn't particularly worried about the ERS looking for her."
Probably not that since I'm a shit writer, but still, try and be vague, but give enough so that the adjective is applied to the intended part.
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She invested in doge coin
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Well, can't argue with that!
This was a fun and raunchy ride with a sweet ending.
This... This belongs on totem, presented to the world under a beam of golden sunlight
It's a sin that there aren't more comments on this story
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Beats me
I'm guessing you're a fan of zebra stuff?
nice happy ending
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Too busy to type.
This needs a sequel with the aforementioned ritualistic breeding wedding
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Don't you tempt me!
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*Tempts you further*
just wanna say i only just came across this fic recently, and holy crap this is probably the hottest fic i've ever read, thank you so much for it!
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My pleasure!
Been putting out stories once a week for over three years.
Thanks for the compliment!