This story is a sequel to Sunset Shimmer Discovers Her Feet
There were many ideas I had when writing Sunset Shimmer Discovers her feet, since there’s a lot from The Little Mermaid half I didn’t include, as well as a lot of in-between moments I didn’t include with the EQG half of the story. This is simply me having fun and de-stressing as I decide to do between my other projects and finding a voice cast for the Sunset’s Feet audio production.
This is all loose ‘cannon’ from the main story that didn’t fit into the narrative of SSDF that may work!...) so just as often as someone of these might fill in plot holes, they may as often create more. Regardless, enjoy;
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awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter i like spike being max they both know what girl was for their master and the lovely artwork
I won't say no to more TLM SciSet. Looking forward to more.
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Pleasure to have you both commenting again ^^
But yeah, no set plan, not likely ever to be completed, just what I feel like writing when I need it , but hope to put out at least a few more stories in the near future at least
I like this little series of side stories
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^.^
Feel free to cirtique/grammar it, although I’m not planing to have this needing a proof reader, honestly will just be me, thinks of a scene, write it, go over it, post it 📝
Two stubborn girls beings stubborn… and cute.
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I’ll only critique it if you want me to, I figured you’d want to do this story mainly on your own
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By all means if you feel up for it 👍 its out for people to see, so it’s all good to be criticized 😊
Although in this particular chapters case it’s more of deleted scenes that I already know the flaws of
I see that Twiggles is already on a trip. To Egypt, because she's in de Nile.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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*slaps you with a fish*
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Fish Fish Fish. Give me Sunset the mermaid
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Pride cometh before the fall.
awesome chapter mate im glad sunset got the statue for her birthday keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
This is an interesting little story. Diamond and Silver fit perfectly into this since Diamond is known for being vain and Silver tends to think more logically than Diamond does. I only wonder how this fits into the Sunset Mermaid story since Diamond and Silver are much younger than Sunset. If this story was added, would it be “canon” or would it be some legend somebody made up? I was also curious as to who the “hot guy” was, he never got a name.
I also thought it would have been neat if the mom and daughter at the end were Celestia and Sunset. Having Sunset say “I won’t be like her mommy” would have made for some interesting foreshadowing. I understand of course why Silver ended up being the mom since she was the one with the happy ending, but to me I felt like showing her family wasn’t necessary since we already know she is going to live happily ever after.
Aww how cute!
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Great feedback, explosivemare ^.^
I admit, it only lossy ties in, and more with the world than story. Honestly this was more an idea I had for the very reasons you mentioned with why you liked this being about Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, and while I’m not planing on changing the ending, I do like that idea of Celestia and a younger Sunset as some kind of possible future short story! 🤩
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter can sunset ride a seapony that will be awesome
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There you are! *boops your nose*
That’s…. No promises
The pun, it burns.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter nice puns
awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter nice the little mermaid references
