Even a god may regret what they have done.
Ever since your birth in the celestial forges, you’ve done all that I have asked of you. You have bled the lightning in your veins, you have endured resurrection after resurrection in the wars for your homeland. But sacrifice, no matter how necessary can still scar the soul. The seasons are shifting, the ages turn, the skies of the mortal realms turn dark. Heralding our storm.
My children, cast in thunder, born of Azyrs wrath. You are my judgement, my vengeance. You are the avatars of my oath. My promise of redemption, to the realms I once abandoned...
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Chapters (3)
What about pinkie pie?
But anyway not bad.
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Damn I forgot about her, I’ll add her in the paragraph
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Thank you anyway can you tell me more about this AU story of your and is Twilight a Evocator-Prime or Knight-Incantor?
I just want to give kudos for a gripping description. I am busy but will check back later.
This certainly caught my eye too.
Wonder how will Spike and Princess Luna be handled in this?
In fact where were they anyway?
Especially for Spike's case. While in the actual episode we don't know where was Luna during the attack.
Since she is referring to the Mane 5, Shining Armor and her parents, what about Spike?
Like what about him?
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Basically I wanted to read an age of sigmar story and yet there’s none on fimfiction for some reason, so I decided to make on myself. I don’t want to tell you too much about the AU because then I might accidently spoil a lot of story detail. A lot of characters are going to be introduced like side characters from the show and I might reveal who plays the role of sigmar in this AU.
yes she’s a knight incantor
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Spike hasn’t been introduced to the mane 5 in this AU. Yet
And luna has other stuff to deal with
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Ok
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So he wasn't even there all of Twilight's life there?
Then where was he anyway this whole time if the Mane 6 haven't even met him yet?
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You’ll find out soon
A Warhammer Fantasy crossover eh? Haven't seen one till now
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This is age of sigmar crossover.
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Which, if you wanna get technically, IS still Warhammer Fantasy, but I know
If Celestia is the God Queen, what would that make of Luna there?
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Well since she’s not gonna be in this story I can tell you about her. She isn’t Luna anymore she’s nightmare moon, she can’t remember the last time anyone has called her Luna. She is god of Ulgu, the realm of shadows and home of the bat ponies. She’s part of the grand alliance of order but she has a dark way of dealing with chaos.
There is a part of Luna that’s still in Nightmare moon that’s trying to burst out and take control but for now Nightmare moon is forever in control of her body. Celestia is trying to fix this but their may be no solution to bring back luna.
Great job so far I always wanted an age of sigmar story but there wasn't any beyond 40k.
P.s. I was hoping luna would be the celestant prime of sigmar.
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Well I’m glad you like it
You use pictures instead descriptions?
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no I do describe them, pictures are there to show what they would look like visually. Also I’ve been told I’m terrible with describing things in the past by my teacher.
The fight scene was described pretty good.
It was cool with what Spike looks like there and how he is leader of the Drakes(if I read that right).
But not really fond of how it turns out he was defeated and captured though.. not much of a good first impression for him honestly due to that..
It just bugs me a bunch about that part..
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Honestly I was worried about the fight scene because the last one I wrote was too quick
And I’m sorry that spike didn’t make a good first impression for you, it was an idea in my head of how the main cast met spike in this AU, in retrospect it could’ve gone better
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You certainly nailed the fight scene.
It.. just really bothers me alot about Spike there since it felt like makes him look really weak. Like his credibility was instantly rendered null by his first appearance being he was defeated and captured like that..
It just bugs me a bunch..
If I may asked, whats GW?
Since apparently there is a problem with its rules or something?
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Games workshop; the owner of all warhammer related content, updated their IP so that their won’t be anymore fan related works like fan animation on youtube unless it’s a parody. so no more serious warhammer animations like Astarte's unless you buy warhammer + the new streaming service. But I’m not sure if it’s the same for fanfiction at the moment.
So me and all the other warhammer fans are boycotting them in their own ways like moving to battletech or not buying warhammer+
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How is that going?
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I'm not sure at the moment, they still haven'tupdated the IP guide lines but I do know that Warhammer+ is going to be bombed hard on release; as well as review bombed
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When would that be?
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can’t remember, sorry
So when are you going to make a next chapter?
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After one more chapter on blood of the Phoenix, then I rewrite chapter four of eternal because the plan has changed.
I lost my plan for chapter four and I can’t find it
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Take your time.
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What's going on now?
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Old news, last year GW was making it so that fan created content isn’t allowed, but I believe it’s all sorted now so there’s no need to worry
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Ok