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Anthro + folcon
WARNING
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I guess I should put that in the description. Sorry about that.
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I think anthro folcon is against site rules
10755706
Either she's not as young as she behaves, which I need to clarify somehow, or they're not entirely humanoid.
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No judgment just looking out
10755729
I appreciate that. I guess I ended up with the idea Puellam's so traumatized she acts considerably younger than she is, not to mention how small she is.
10755738
You might want to remove the story from the Foalcon group, then.
10757330
How might I do that? I know how to submit, but I've yet to figure out how to remove a story.
10757346
If you go to the group and join it, you should be able to find and remove your story if you're the one who submitted it, I think. If not, you'll need to contact the group owner and hide it from the Featured list of groups in the interim.
10757357
I wanted the lead to be young, but with it being anthro, I have concerns.
10757359
Well, you have to make a choice: anthro or foalcon. Otherwise it breaks the site's TOS, which are silly, but they are the rules.
10757361
I want it to be anthro, so I'll have to cut off an audience.
So are just the princesses publicly nude, or is everyone publicly nude?
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Everything's public nude. I'm considering this part of some of my other stories where everyone's anthro and nude. Except for special occasions like the Gala or weddings.
10759360
Now that is what I like
10759493
Basically the show but in anthro form and for the adults.
10759498
Make sense
Excellent story keep up the good work
10765153
I'll do my best.
Thank you!
Weird story but in a good way. Pretty interesting so far
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Thank you.
Cute, and a small part of me wants them to get together.
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Who? Puellam and Aura, or Puellam with the sisters? Or all of the above?
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Her and Aura, but anything works ☺️
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That is the idea. I'm not sure how I'll work it like that, usually, I let the characters tell the story when I write, but I'm sure It'll work out.
Do you mean desolate?
To me that entire sequence was too violent for ponies or in this story they must really be hated
The prejudice seems a bit much here like since she is adopted they would probably let her in but stare at her menacingly this just seems like a dereliction of duty
And then these kids got sent to prison for kidnapping assault and mutilation
Seriously did the main character get unlucky or are ponies violent enough here that getting mugged in an alley is no big deal like Luna Damn I thought ponies were pacifists
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The idea was this is so soon after the changelings were reformed that the ponies still didn't trust them, on top of the idea that some ponies are absolute jerks. We know ponies can get violent, even evil (Tempest Shadow, King Sombra, Sunset Shimmer, etc.), so it's not outside possibilities for those bullies to think so highly of themselves and so little of Puellam to go this far, especially given the right background.
Remember, Puellam's attackers were unicorns, and they used a sound bubble to make sure they wouldn't be heard.
I think it's reasonable to believe the guards would have issues with the changelings and take every chance they get to make Puellam's life a little harder until they get used to the fact that changelings are now a part of their society.
Aura has a different personality from your average pony. She doesn't take BS from anyone, and she has zero patients for bullies. She won't hesitate to curse you out if you're a jerk.
Thank you for correcting me on the Desolate Zone.
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They just got unlucky then. Eh thanks for the explanation
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I had been thinking of ways to continue this story for a while now, and Tempest Shadow's backstory was sticking in my head. I thought adding some tragedy might help paint a path for character development down the road, even though Puellam's already had it hard.
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It's your story write it. The worst thing that can happen is that the chapter doesn't seem at all like the others
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I admit it is a sudden change of pace, but I didn't have any other ideas on how to continue and the only other writer I know who I can talk to isn't active that often to offer advice like he used to.