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Thank you! I'll do my best.

Weird story but in a good way. Pretty interesting so far

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Thank you.

Cute, and a small part of me wants them to get together.

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Who? Puellam and Aura, or Puellam with the sisters? Or all of the above?

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Her and Aura, but anything works ☺️

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That is the idea. I'm not sure how I'll work it like that, usually, I let the characters tell the story when I write, but I'm sure It'll work out.

"Well, we got rid of them, huh?" Aura's voice called warmly. "You can come out of your shell now, hun," Aura offered. "Those bastards are gone."

To me that entire sequence was too violent for ponies or in this story they must really be hated

"Drop the act!" Luna barked. "We both know the real reason you're refusing to let my da- I mean, my niece's friend into the castle!"

The prejudice seems a bit much here like since she is adopted they would probably let her in but stare at her menacingly this just seems like a dereliction of duty