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You know... If i keep smiling like that i might suffer from face muscle fatige... Please continue... They could need some exercise
Alright everyone, get ready for the ground war.
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And you didn’t even need to stay up late this time to read it!
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First, they need to make it to ground alive.
Bam! Time to start the party...
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Purrrfection 👍
As worse as weekly anime shows with the cliffhangers!!!
Good that I'm used to it!
Great chapter!
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If only I could get Kyle Hebert to narrate the endings DBZ-style!
All my readers are! Honestly, I think I abuse my readers with this...
Thanks!
well poo the shit has hit the fan.
but who or what is behind this?
can we say Ibex ..
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That reminds me, how is this going to work out with the stolen items, now that a lot of owners are away from town?
Hooo damn. That went really bad really quick.
Here we go.
DUN, DUN, DUUUUUUUN!!!!!!!! It's finally started! Thanks Firesight for the last couple of amazing chapters you've released recently, they've been a great Christmas present to entertain me for the next couple of days. Now that we're at the point in the plot where the Cloven have finally showed up, close to the when the original Feathered hearts left off, I'm really excited to see how you apply your great creative writing talents into progressing the story from where it left off in the original. I also wanted to say that you handled the dialog and whole diplomatic affair with Gilda, Marco, Morran and Goldburge quite well, with a decent amount of conflict and heartache thrown in without the whole thing becoming an depressing angst-fest. I also found the last couple of chapters to be quite clever in the way in which you were able to link the events of Marco's and Gilda's recent hookup and it's resulting consequences with the convoy ambush events of the original story.
I wish you the best of luck writing your next chapter as always, and also wish you a very merry Hearths-warming. Cheers!!
Ah, we get to the meat of the story (other than Marco's of coure)
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A good question.
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Dammit. This means I have clean the fan.
I blame the Ibex. And Chryssie. And Tirek. And Cozy Glow...
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They flew past the frying pan and plunged right into the fire. 🔥 🔥
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Hopefully it’s just as fun as the other kind!
You’re very welcome! Glad to be of service. And I’m very glad you’ve enjoyed the new content.
Well, actually, we’re still a ways off from that. In the original, the Cloven arrived at the end of chapter 5, so chapters 6-20 were dedicated to the war. I haven’t touched those yet, but don’t worry. I will.
As for what I’m planning when I do reach the continuation point, I already know the rough outline. It’s going to be epic, with parallels to both the battles of Helms Deep and Pelennor Fields from the second and third Lord of the Rings movies. I’ll leave it to you figure out what that means in terms of battle progression and rescue forces, but I will say this: The Hall of Heroes will figure prominently, and the Kingdom will not stand alone against the Cloven threat.
I’m very happy to hear you say that. I hate wall to wall angst or grimdark stuff; I always try to balance my stories with good times to go with the bad, low points to go with high points. From what you say, I struck that balance perfectly, and gave readers exactly the roller-coaster ride I wanted.
Thanks again! Yeah, if I wasn’t careful, I could have painted myself into a writing corner there, but fortunately, I found the perfect way out of it. Like I said, a completely different route to the convoy attack, but it works perfectly for the updated story in my view.
To you as well, sir! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! 🎄
It is a good question, but I do have the answer. I thought of including it here in this chapter, but I couldn’t really find a natural place to bring it up and answer it. You’ll find out in subsequent chapters.
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That was the exact thing I was thinking of!
Anyone else read this,
, But hear this...
Great chapter, again! Lots of great character growth and the interaction felt very natural. I only hope we didn't loose some very interesting new characters... I can't help but like all the soldiers, even the Paladins... sorta... Chomping at the bit to see where this goes! Thx again for the early x-mas present Firesight!
Lets hope the folks in the lead coach ain't out of it yet, kinda wanna see the Pfc pop a few off at the guys shooting lightning...
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I did. I very much did.
I just want to tell you both good luck. We're all counting on you.
Oooh, bad move, Giraldi! You've just issued an irresistible dueling challenge to Murphy--and he has gleefully accepted!
edit--> Pinkie as Murphy!? Now THAT'S a horrifying thought, even worse than the ones Gilda is dealing with!
Next chapter someone should call in for reinforments:
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There is nothing more special than when a background pony steals a scene the way Octavia, Lyra, Vinyl, Roseluck and many others did. MLPFiM didn't just tell a story, it created them through moments such as these.
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Murphy: "Challange accepted!"
Marco has archived 'the Prophet'
Red Comet might come to save his Maiden Griffon Eagless mate?
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Murphy has answered every challenge I’ve put before him to this point!
Achievement unlocked! We’ll add to accidentally groping a griffon, bedding one, getting expelled, and surviving an air coach crash. Poor guy, but at least he’s had as many good things happen to him as bad. And so it will remain.
Oh, you mean Crimson Comet? I have something planned regarding him later—much later.
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I’ve been issuing challenges to him this entire time with my writing, and he has always answered it in fine fashion! In fact, I consider him an integral part of my writing, for without him, how could I get characters into all these wonderful situations I can then weave tales around?
Hey, the only thing that would make this day any worse for Gilda is if Pinkie Pie suddenly appeared!
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Even brief throwaway scenes like that were unquestionably the soul of the show and spoke to how deep it went. People fell in love with background characters even over how rich their lives and personalities were implied to be. Ah, G4... at your best, you were the best ever.
Next time in MLP Battlefields are no fun:
Can someone explain that one to me?
Pretty please
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Next time in MLP Battlefields are no fun:
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Don’t give the Cloven ideas!
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https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=moto
They really need to get the invention named parachutes. Considering incidents like this, i could imagine humans giving it as freebie for their own safety...
Expectations (Starlight Glimmer)
Versus
Reality (Queen Chrysalis)
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Keep working the problem Griffons of the Empire and Marines of the Corp!
Murphy be like:
Hm... What could have happened...
Maybe:
-Problems with the couches due to manufacturing mistakes or missing maintnance.
-Bandit attack.
-Ibex again...
-The Inn burns down before their arrival.
-Sky Pirates? There existence was mentioned in the MLP Movie with the storm King if I am not mistaken.
-The obesity of the Ambassador aid causes a so fat heart attack that it kills everyone in his family, creating a incident that delays Gilda and Marcos opportunities for last snu snu before his deportation...