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Finaly! Update ♡♡♡♡♡
Holy Shiiit... That was one huge turn of events A~w~e~s~o~m~e ♡
Very clever magic Backups! That just saved Griffons and Marines a lot of trouble wile putting the Ibex under a lot of trouble and pressure 👍
Sooo... Perhaps they can enjoy 300 again. They did enjoy this Griffon culture like movie
That update was great! Magnificent chapter
The spells activate when the approved people are a certain distance away? Get the griffon forces on high alert and send the humans on a short trip outside the city.
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Nah. Gladiator would be better at this point. Ot Antonin and Cleopatra.
Excelente!! I was waiting for this, now we are finnish with the drug stuff, which film Will they watch? The lord of the rings like the old story? Fearless? The Croods? Brave?
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They reacted the most on 300 movie so i would start with it ♡
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That a very fine outside the box thinking. Problem is... Some of the stuff enchanted is not allowed for anyone to have with them... Packing all that stuff up might get catched. Only Tara is free of consequences...
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You’re welcome! Sorry to make you wait, but I had to get off work, then work out, then make some dinner before loading the chapter to fimfiction and hitting the launch button.
I assume you’re referring to the revelation that Gilda was the one who gave Tara the scratches, and the fireworks that followed. Glad to see it took you by surprise!
The Ibex are at their breaking point by now, but aren’t quite out of tricks yet. You’ll see in the chapters to come. But that’s okay, since they’ll unintentionally be doing our griffon and human friends a favor later. What do I mean? In this case, no spoilers.
It will be watched again, but not right away. I plan to save it for a special moment. Other movies will be in the offing, though.
Thank you, sir! I really do appreciate your enthusiasm and all your comments.
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You know, that’s actually a really good point. I wish I’d thought of it before, and I’ll have to address it later.
As I think about it now, that would be difficult for several reasons: 1) they’re not fit to travel right now, 2) that would require them to reveal what they did and why--i.e., what they’re hiding, which would get them in a lot of trouble (The chest contains storage gems that hold their personal weapons and ammo--you may recall that in the original story, Marco smuggled some guns in? This is how he did it, but in this story, they’re all gun aficionados and Chris and Tara brought some too), and 3) revealing it might also get Starlight in trouble back in Equestria since she knew what they were hiding.
Regardless, thanks for pointing this out. I’ll make a point to address it when I start editing the original chapters again.
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We will have to see. Honestly, I haven’t decided yet. I also haven’t seen either of those movies.
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Thanks! As for what film, that remains to be seen! LoTR is definitely going to be watched, since I intend the climax of the story to be very LoTR-esque, but others will be on tap as well, at least until the Cloven come. Haven’t seen The Croods, but I do remember watching Brave. That was an interesting story. Gilda might like it given the badass female protagonist.
I greatly enjoyed this, thank you for a wonderful update!
Anyone else wonder how long till Gilda starts having this dream?
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You’re very welcome! Thanks for chiming in.
Nice Midway gif! As you just gave me an idea, probably a lot sooner than you think!
Thanks for the update 😀. I still wonder what the Ibex want with the computers – it is not that they have any chance to use them.
wonder how long Gilda and Fortrakt or the marines take to figure out: get the people out of town that the magic is linked to, to trigger the flares.
if the mountain doesn't come to the prophet ...
ok there needs to be a message sent to Starlight and Twilight , there is a way to track at lest some of the things.
i hear goat is good to eat if you cook it really really good.
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That's pretty high on the warcrimes scale.
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You’re welcome! They want the same thing the Council of Crows does--to examine their tech to see if it can be replicated or maybe even magically interfaced with. Can it? Stay tuned--there’s a reason the Ibex adepts are disobeying orders.
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Well, this is a good point and an instance where I wish I’d thought it before, because I’ll have to address it in the next chapter now.
You weren’t the first reader to point this out, so I’ll give you same the same answer I did earlier: That there are several problems with doing this.
First, they’re not fit to travel right now. Second, that would mean revealing what they were hiding (their personal guns and ammo) and being in a shitload of trouble. Goldberg would have a very strong and valid reason to expel them in that instance--nobody was supposed to bring guns except the Marines, who had them magically secured from theft or tampering by Twilight Sparkle herself (you’ll learn the parameters of her enchantments later)--and that might even endanger Tara’s asylum if the griffies take exception to the smuggling through customs and otherwise think the civilians were being careless with such powerful weaponry. Third, that might get Starlight in trouble back in Equestria since she helped them smuggle it in and conceal it.
I promise I’ll address these points in the following chapter. Thanks for the feedback!
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The local Jamaican place serves goat, and it’s good! Also oxtail, but that’s a different story. edible, but you have to get it off the tail bones, and there’s less meat than bone there. As for a message to S&T, you can be sure they’re following events overseas with interest and worry. I’ll mention this next chapter. But they’ll have far more cause to worry shortly! For the ancient enemies of the Kingdom are already gathering and getting ready to show themselves...
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And one the griffies themselves were guilty of during the war with Equestria.
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things thend to spiral out of control pretty fast, when you start eating your enemies.
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Unless your name is Kirby.
Really--??
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Even if they might have to go to Equestria, Griffons losing a wing could eventually get back up into the air again--whereas most human prosthetics can barely do more than fill the jacket sleeve or pants leg of the clothes being worn by an injured vet.
Furthermore, if humans ever could produce something that could match the person's natural limbs--it would literally cost a small fortune.
You've probably already wrote the reveal to Tara about what the video from the laptop will show, but wouldn't it be a hoot if those WEREN'T Fortrakt's claw marks, either--rather it was Gilda's!?
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Seriously, that idea above had only just occurred to me when I actually got to read those paragraphs--I had NOT looked ahead. But I can only say, [voice=Pinkie Pie]you're good![/voice]
Hmmm...
Are you sure it wasn't this?:
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Yes, really. That’s an alternate timeline; we never saw that in the real one. In any event, this is an AU, and I don’t go by show canon anyway--if I did, this story wouldn’t work at all. Sorry, I’m not changing this one.
Maybe, but I’m sure the day is coming where mechanical limbs not only impart equal abilities, but even improved ones. Perhaps human medicine crossed with Tellusian magic could do the trick in this verse...? I already wrote in Five Star Service years ago that some griffons who lost limbs in the Cloven war received mechanical replacements from human surgeons. Nothing that says they couldn’t have somehow incorporated Tellusian magic to improve them.
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Congratulations! You’ve just fallen into the same trap my prereaders have repeatedly--suggesting something only for it to already be in the story just a few paragraphs later. Yep, it was Gilda, and you’ll find out what happened in a future chapter of Eros.
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Heh! Well, given the Marines came through a portal, a Stargate weapon would be strangely apt here! Might even be of good use against a magically-disguised Ibex...
Well, not as a clever as I originally thought, since a reader pointed out an obvious loophole. I ended up addressing it in the next chapter, so hopefully that potential plot hole is plugged.
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PS: I hadn’t seen those videos or heard those songs before. I like them.
Tough pill to swallow... At least the aftertaste has a pleasing note to it...
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Yeah, it is. But as you know by now, he’s wrong on all counts, and is even starting to remember some stuff. The better question is, what will happen when he remembers all of it? When will that happen, you ask? In the chapter I release next week.
This chapter made a lot of mountain Goats unhappy
Friendship is magic, Ibex hate it