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This will be a huge cliffhanger. I am feeling blueballed for the next chapter already
Amazing chapter!
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I think Operation Flashpoint soundtracks fit very well with this story for this chapter perhaps that and the Church organ soundtrack:
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Second perhaps for the chapter with many dead Griffons or all the slaughtered Civilian...
Sweet, a new chappie! I just got out of work early, as well! Heading home to slap eyes on this one!
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excellent writing, the chit-chat is very believable. Here is to hoping the muse is treating you well, and that the next chapter is well on the way :) Cheers!
That was a ride.
Two new things that many Griffins would want on range day. I wonder when the AT4 or other man portable antitank/air stuff comes out (TOW vs dragon anyone?)
Also interesting character development.
A meeting of Fortrakts dad and Giraldi sounds like something worth reading too.
That was a ride.
Two new things that many Griffins would want on range day. I wonder when the AT4 or other man portable antitank/air stuff comes out (TOW vs dragon anyone?)
Also interesting character development.
Like Gilda understanding what humans mean with them being pretty touchy.
A meeting of Fortrakts dad and Giraldi sounds like something worth reading too.
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Mission accomplished, then! As I’m working on Firefly again, I’ll try to circle back on your comments on Before the Storm before too long.
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Glad you liked!
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You’re right, that’s not bad. I’ll try to find a way to use them later. The second one with organ music strikes me as a good tune for a facing-defeat sequence.
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Figures my only error would be in the first paragraph of the Author’s notes. Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for being another set of eyes on my stuff!
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Thanks! I truly do think the chit-chat sold the chapter. But with apologies, you’re going to have to wait a bit on the next one given I’m shifting over to Firefly and Unleash the Magic for a bit, as they’ve been languishing for a while.
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You double-posted? Looks like the same comment from you appears twice.
It was indeed! And it’s just getting started...
Sooner rather than later! And the griffies might to get to use human weapons sooner than you think, too...
Thanks. I try to make that a hallmark of my works, whether action, drama or clop. In chapters like this, all three intersect. They’re actually my favorites to write.
I’m not certain I understand this. You mean Gilda understanding what humans mean by being touchy-feely, like putting a hand on shoulders?
You’re right; that would be interesting. I could see them talking over tea and larded scones.
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Waiting for quality work is worth it, besides we'll just have to check out your other stories :)
wait, we have breaking news... Marine command has managed to get an automated drone up on an encrypted frequency, patching in the feed to the steadholt of Bale to check in on our beleaguered brethren...
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oh, my! things are looking grim... lets hope their supplies hold out!
It's Glim Glam time~ The one who gone head to head with an Alicorn, the mare who got the best shot at discord solo, the one who truly bend time around her hooves now on the case.
I feel sorry to the Cloven, and the Humans, and why Humans? Well we won't get to see nukes when fav pon clops onto the scene
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Damn the cliff hanger, i already have my withdrawal symptoms
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Humans don't mean it in an erotic way to put their hands on withers and flight muscles.
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Right. But it could potentially work both ways, given griffons wouldn’t mean it in an erotic way to put talons on a chest. That could get them in trouble with human females, and even potentially males. Might explore that angle a bit later.
Not gonna lie when they were bringing out the fifty and running into issues getting it set up in time part of me was thinking an earth gryphon was gonna need to take it out of necessity and start going Rambo on the Cloven.
But that wouldn't have fit in.
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Not yet, it doesn’t.
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Oh, there may come a time...
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I had to have it explained what you meant by intrusion fiction vs social fiction. It is absolutely a social fiction—the entire G4Mverse is—and never claimed to be anything else. So you're complaining that a story written in the G4Mverse reads like a story written in the G4Mverse? And what do you mean by 'dominance'? I find that description head-scratching.
If you believe that there can’t be an Awe moment now just because they associated the human weapons with cannons, then I challenge you to read through chapter 20, where the first battle of the Cloven War takes place. I amped up that scene massively over the original, including the Awe factor. Just because they guessed the nature of human weapons does NOT mean they've even begun to grasp their full power or capability.
There's that word again. The theme of this story is not “Dominance” but “Balance”. Balance between worlds; between races. I am not interested in writing a humanity stronk fic, and that was never the essence of the Gentlemanverse anyway.
Because the griffons should be far too ignorant to be able to have insights, and they would never have developed analogs of their own in a thousand years of conflict with neighboring nations? If you want them primitive and dumb with humans dominant, you'll have to go elsewhere.
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There are good takes and valid criticisms, but this comment is neither. I also don’t appreciate your tone with AJ_Aficionado, who is my friend and replied to you in a very measured fashion. I'm sorry this story doesn't rise to your standards, but at this point, you haven't risen to mine as a reader or commenter. Have a good one.
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Most delightful answers that will make me even more thirsty for updates
I should add more species in general to my storys currently published
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Chrysalis: " The Cloven, you say? Well, fuck! There's goes the neighborhood! Sorry, griffons and Equestria, you're all on your own. Wish we could help, but as you have frequently telling me: 'you can always pick your friends, but you can never pick your family'. So, you see, we really can't get involved, seeing as how they're our cousins. "
Applejack: "Wow. An' Ah thought the Flim brothers were a pair of bad Apples. "
Chrysalis: "You don't know the half of it. If you want a true horror story, just ask any of the Clove about Bob. And if you do, it just might make them slow down a bit in their fight as remembering what Bob did will make even other Cloven sick to their stomachs. But before you do, you'd all better have something strong and stiff to drink, or you won't survive the telling, either. "
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This soldier was human in a war where Kindness and Generousity could get you killed. A true Hero!
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I hear the song for 4 hours straight.
Earworm factor is high
Griffons must have nippels of steel or very resistant rubber so the beaks of the Cubs don't hurt the Mother that is nursing. Unless:
Minus mother puke half digested food for Cub.
Nature is interesting...
I'm really enjoying this long story and I also like how u put M and T rating and on the chapters and gave us the option to pick what ones to read
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You're welcome! And I appreciate you saying so. It's a lot of additional work and makes editing a pain when I have to make the same change to different versions of the same chapter, but it's worth it to keep both clop and non-clop readers happy.