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Hot damn, very well worth the wait. This chapter satisfying all my likes:
Humor, adult fun, great character development and world/race lore, detailed and vage description to work ones own imagination and many more.
Mad respect for another masterpiece in form of a text based chapter ♡
👍👍👍👍👍
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Outstanding!
Then it sounds like I did my job as a writer, feeding the imagination of my readers. That’s pretty much the highest compliment an author can ever be paid.
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Shower thought: are the changlings going to offer to replace everyone they can, who died to the cloven. Even if it's just to help parents and relatives to find closure?
Overall i love that the story continues!
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Well, I don't think they can do that for everyone given how small their hive is in relation to the number of dead, but I do have plans to use that in a very limited manner later.
Thanks for saying so! More is coming, both here and over in Eros.
While you can't link stuff directly, it should be pointed out that you can imbed it last I checked. On that note, time to read this latest chapter!
And as we discussed in the comments, "the head" was just holes cut in the ship's deck for human waste to dump out into the ocean found at the head of the ship. I wonder what sailors would do if the seas got really bad? They ended up with a poopy poop deck, I suppose. Wait, is that why they call it that?
The odd "holding in your pee" fetishist is very excited right now to finally get their due from Sensei Firesight.
In other words, a cossack.
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(Cries in Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth)
The Changelings are like Superman if he did all his heroics dressed like Clark Kent!
"As Changelings, we love everyone except other Changelings. Those fuckers ain't to be trusted under any circumstances." - based Changeling.
Note: I forgot how much this song kicks ass. Thanks for inspiring me to reference it!
> When you Personal Union Bohemia, Burgundy, Sweden, Milan, Hungary and Muscovy as Austria in EU4
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Reading this a second time, I'd delete "outright". It feels like too much. I'm digging all this Changeling lore, by the way.
"Rise and Hide First: The Secret History of the Lepidotes Tribe's Sexual Shenanigans" New Yoke Times bestseller now available for sale on Amazon Books.
Do they have an Eeveelution division?
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Sadly Rarity wasn't present to contribute whine to their cheese.
A sexy Kirin is no commandeer!
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As much as I hate to crib a comment from the Gdoc I left, "You'll own nothing and love it!" except the person speaking isn't from the WEF but an orgy enthusiast.
FInished with part 1 of my longpost. A lot of the lore additions weren't present during my preread but they're a welcome addition to the story. As someone who's mentioned the story seeming to drive from its original path, stuff like the extended bit on the CHangelings felt like a return to form I can get behind. Great stuff!
I feel like, given the story I'm reading, this could mean to guys with swords or two guys with dicks doing "swordplay".
Ahh, so it is of the literal variety. Carry on!
The idea of conjured weapons makes me wonder about mass versus energy. Not necessarily super important in a friendly sparring match, but why create a weapon designed to be carried in the hands when you can conjure an item much more difficult to block? Or why conjure weapons at all? If mass is generated by magic and magic is just another form of energy, why not save energy by crafting weapons that can easily be handled with levitation spells? Mithril daggers one can draw from their battle dress uniforms or even be wielded by hoof or claw if an anti-magic field is in place and so on.
Might be an idea you can use for one of the lesser-powered caster species like the Impala in future chapters.
By your powers combined, I am Captain Fetish! Oh wait, not those kind of rings...
Devi Desiderii still sounds like a rapper name to me.
Devi Desierii
Devi Desierii
Devi Desierii
My cauldron's never empty, bitch!
I like the idea that people carve symbols into their bodies or inscribe them on their clothing to augment their powers in fictional magical worlds. It would be an explanation as to why some magical effects seem to persist for indefinite periods while others fade. Using that logic here, it would be simple to understand if Fortrakt had been augmented or not - just look for differences in his physiology.
Pike is the kind of guy who used to tell the other kids they "smelled like a butt" as an insult when he was younger and who never learned to add elements to an insult later on in life. At the same time, it's kind of refreshing. If he was your average internet user today, he'd employ the same sort of empty postmodern irony that clogs social media today to get past the moderators. Gilda still needs to fuck him up for insulting our favorite flip, though!
Ouch! Pike scored a hit there. A brief soundbite easily digested by the masses following a fairly long and largely defensive response from Gilda. He was hiding his power levels, clearly!
Bro move there. Gilda would only have made herself look much worse by losing control in this situation. In a way, Pike has made a good point; Gilda is still not ready for the responsibility she wields if she can be so easily provoked and undermined by someone of lower rank. And with the buck passed to this changeling to deal with Pike's insubordination, she faces the indignity of having to be bailed out by someone else.
Gilda, of course, is for all intents and purposes, a human like us and subject to the same failings but I hope that she reflects on what just happened later on and at the very least learns to control her temper. And at best, learn to parry a clumsily delivered taunt and go straight to pointing out every inadequacy Pike has before applying a judicious application of physical punishment without offering a duel at all. Fuck that guy.
Ah right. No violence. You know, the entire Griffon system of command with its hyperfocus on honor is rendered entirely useless in this situation. Prime Dipshit gets to just fling poo at his superior officer without someone simply removing him. I've said it before and I'll say it again here; the whole Klingon way of doing things is stupid and counterproductive and before these people invent guns, they need to invent common sense to deal with simple adult interactions first without resorting to death battles.
Indeed, exactly what I was thinking when I read this. I am glad you added this and somewhat disappointed I didn't engage with this part of the chapter more carefully my first time through it. I guess I've been distracted by other things.
Funny, given the amount of respect he's shown Gilda to this point is none!
Yes, exactly, Pike. I have just DB'd myself in epic fashion, in real time, on fimfiction. Is this an example of being meta-trolled or have I mentally regressed to my 2014 self? (sigh) AJ Aficionado Tenth anniversary edition!
My boy, you were doing so well. One wonders how this idiot ever got to command so much as a mop and bucket, much less a group of men under arms. I'm sure griffon society is bound to be more openly racist than America's but straight up dissing this buggo straight to his face for no fucking reason is completely unprofessional and in my eyes, he just lost any case for being the better griffon. I imagine all present feel the same way as I do, even if they dislike Changelings themselves. What a tactless cunt.
I'll say this, I did like the solution you wrote for this scene when I was reading it on the google doc. Far too often these sorts of issues get settled with duels and so it's nice to see a scene with all this tension buildup get relieved in a fun way instead of a violent one. Popcorn at the ready! Let's watch this asshole get humiliated.
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Biggis Dickus has arrived!
Guns: check. Sex: check. Biggus DIckus: A surprise but a welcome one to say the least. Keep up the amazing Latin puns, Sensei!
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You can embed it, yes, but you can only embed a story. It won’t link to a specific chapter. I actually tried embedding a chapter link, but unfortunately, it only went to the story’s front page. But no matter. Thanks for the longpost reply!
Could be! It’s also worth noting that sailors at sea only got a ration of two liters (or was it pints?) of water a day. Only enough to drink, and definitely not enough to bathe with. So before long, everyone smelled absolutely rank and the BO was off the charts, especially in the crew areas below.
Sensei aims to please! I admit I half-considered doing something like that, but then I slapped myself hard, repeatedly. And I’m sure you would have happily joined in had you been there. As would all of Team Allure.
Can’t say I was thinking that at the time, but pretty much, yep. Come to think of it, the historical parallels work pretty well on that basis.
Poor Poland. The real-life Thestralslovakia. Too big and rich to ignore but not big or rich enough to hold the line against far larger and historically aggressive neighbors. The PLC was perhaps the one chance to truly become and remain a continental power, and for a while they succeeded—hell, they even conquered and occupied Moscow once! But they fell prey like so many failed multi-ethnic/religious states to internal schisms and corruption.
It that alternate reality, Superman is a second-rate Superhero by day that’s regularly laughed at when he appears due to basically wearing toddler Underoos, and a swashbuckling journalistic crusader in a sharp three-piece business suit who reveals corporate corruption and helps little old ladies across the street at night.
I need to get an AI engine just so I can have it make a picture of a based Chad Changeling!
You’re very welcome. And thanks for sharing it with me.
Everything that happens in both fiction and non-fiction really does have an EU4 analog, doesn’t it? That’s what makes it the ultimate game.
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You know, EU4 really should have an inbreeding achievement!
Removed. And thanks! Plenty more to come, especially in later chapters of Eros.
With foreword by Denim_Blue. Sadly, Queen Lepidoptes is now the subject of a cancel culture mob for daring to imply that sex with masculine men could be satisfying and blue-haired human women with nose rings generally weren’t.
I bet they will after they learn about them! Just imagine them disguising themselves as Pokemon and visiting earth. They’d be a huge hit at conventions. The question then becomes, can they mimic fictional powers as well as appearances? Because if they could...
Perfect pic! And yes it is... or will it be after all is said and done?
A pity, since her whine is always of such an excellent quality and vintage!
Kirin are by definition sexy! In fact, the only thing that could have improved the near-perfect original Pirates of the Caribbean further was for there to be a Kirin present. Hmmm... making a picture for that sounds like once again a job for an AI engine.
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True. The WEF aren’t orgy enthusiasts so much as Epstein Island ones.
Good to hear. Yeah, I was starting to go off-track a bit there, but you steered me back on the proper course. You’ll be seeing a lot more lore heading forward, both here and in Eros. In any event, thanks for the longpost, and hope you liked the reply! But there’s still more to come. Onward to part 2...
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Given this story? It probably will mean different things at different times!
Hopefully readers aren’t too disappointed.
It’s a valid point. As they have such large horns that makes them very adept at magic, Ibex are basically Green Lanterns in how they live and fight--in other words, basically using their powers to manifest whatever tool or object they need, with their sturdiness a function of magical strength and will. A construct can be broken, by the way, and I guess I’ll have to show that later. As well as what happens to the caster when it is.
Agreed. I try to have each race have a different magical method and philosophy, so that could be a good one for the impala whenever I finally introduce them.
I’m sure that cosplay exists somewhere. And that the most likely people to be doing it are very unattractive.
Once again, creating the image of a rapper Devi Desiderii sounds like a job for AI!
I do plan for him and everyone else to undergo examinations later to see why the cider effect is still in them, and if it can be completely purged. But on the subject of carved symbols, the excellent anime Fullmetal Alchemist comes to mind.
That’s one of the most badass moments of the entire excellent series, if not all anime. His wrist Sigel gives him the alchemic ability to control fire. Normally he has it on a glove that he can snap his fingers to create sparks with and then manipulate those. But in this case, wounded and stripped of his glove, he carved it directly into his skin and seared his wound shut, then put down an incredibly powerful opponent who had nearly (but not quite) unlimited regeneration capability.
She was going to, but...
At his rank, he’s dealt with palace intrigue and lesser soldiers who think they’re better than they are. This is the first time he’s been forced to be ordered about by one, so he’s going to provoke her until she snaps and challenges him, at which point he can put her down hard and then either take over command or be assigned elsewhere.
Pike has a good point, and so do you here. Buck passing reflects somewhat badly on Gilda here. I’ll have to address that later, I think. I’m already thinking up ways to do it.
As she said earlier, she’s still got some teenage idiot in her, and sometimes her temper still gets the best of her—especially when under the influence of the cider. What will be key for her is being able to master and harness it instead of being controlled by it. She’s managed it a couple times under duress, but can she do it on cue...?
In fairness, few duels are ever to the death in the modern Kingdom. Usually just to knockout or surrender. But yeah, griffies with guns might be a little wild west at this point. It’s going to happen, though, and they’re going to have to figure out how to modify societal rules to accommodate them without getting people killed.
Uh, yeah. You have been, and you have every right to be. Don’t worry about it. Now that you’ve pointed this out, I can deal with it more properly later.
*grins*
Good to see that the DB legacy lives on in not just the Changelings!
He’s a senior NCO rather than an officer, but the lines between that and junior officer are severely blurred for the griffies. Especially in elite services like the Paladins. That said, respect has to be earned in griffon society. He thinks that the Changelings and Gilda have to earn his, but forgets that he has to earn theirs in turn. And he’s about to fail utterly at that.
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This was one of those scenes I’d actually been planning for a while. Think I pulled it off pretty good, too!
Reunited with his wife, Incontinentia Buttocks! Somewhat literally, in this case...
My pleasure! Let’s see... it has guns, it has sex, and it has Latin puns. So what else is left in life? Oh, yes: Eevees.
I'm osrry I didn't commnented sooner, but I have...lot of work recently and I only managed to get to this
I basicly have nothing to complain for this part, tough I still have to catch up with Eros, so there were moments that made me bit confused and could have used a bit more explanation I think.
I also like how only now, the Gryphgon Military realizing how much entwined they are with Lepidoptes and her hive
Your eros invalidated some of this chapters knowledge, you have to edit some of it.
For example:
This is no longer accurate.
The T rated version will need the change as well.
Also wasn't it contradicted somewhere in this chapter later?
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Oh?
I don't see a contradiction. I haven't written the part in Eros yet where Fortrakt reveals what happened, but the parts where the Queen detected it and rebuked him already happened. She said as much when she told him that sense everyone was revealing their secrets, he had to as well.
There are at least two more chapters in the Eros story arc that are coming. His admission will happen in those.
You'll have to point it out, because I don't see it.
While there are some definite benefits to the altered love-poison they were exposed to, the detrimental effects are too many and severe. Ideally, we can only hope most of the benefits will remain, but the poison should be purged sooner rather than later.
The only alternative is if due consideration isn't given to those detrimental issues, some idiot in the Griffon government will no doubt think it's okay to order ALL troops to be dosed with the Ibexian-altered love poison and to hell with the consequences.
To this chapter, I hope they get enough time for the new Paladins to train with Gilda's Diplomatic Corps before the next wave of Cloven breaks on their shores.
Yeah! All caught up!
Great re-reading, looking forward to the next story update ♡
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Great idea, the cubs will need parents after all.
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Some are better than none.