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I am an average everyday brony. I like to let my creative juices flow and create things. I'm always striving to improve, so I hope you enjoy my stories.

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Cheerilee has always told everypony that her cutie mark represents her love for teaching, and her desire to help future generations grow and develop. How exactly did she come to realize her special talent though? A personal epiphany? An epic adventure? A tragic accident? After another failed experiment, the Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to ask Cheerilee for advice on how to obtain theirs; Cheerilee relays a tale of how she discovered her love for teaching, and the mare she knew she would be. (One Shot)

A simple story about how one serene moment can change our whole outlook on life and what we know about ourselves. Inspired after reading Pinkie Watches Paint Dry while sitting on my porch and looking at the rose bushes on my front lawn. I guess that's what happens when you contemplate life while observing nature's beauty.

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Comments ( 12 )

Really good.
Seriously, it's good.
A thumb and like.
I only fave sometimes...

That was a really good story. Everypony seems to be in character. so that's a good thing, and overall pretty good.

A mustache for your thoughts: :moustache:

D'awwww, that's so cute! It's really well written, and I love your portrayal of the characters. :pinkiehappy:
Cheerilee needs her own episode... when she isn't under a curse the whole time, anyways.

Awesome! :twilightsmile:

All my likes are belong to you! :twilightblush:
I think this might get to the top. At least i wish it will.

Well, at least Sweetie got it... this is a great story, like and fav for you!

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Thank you everypony for your support! :) This is only my second fic and the first kind of philosophical one, so I had no idea how it would turn out. I am glad that you all enjoyed it. Your kind words; they bring me joy and tears of happiness as a writer. :')

That was a nice story. I myself never really thought of cutie marks that way, you know, as something inside you.

I think this was really well written, and i can FEEL the effort you've put into writing this story. Its nice to see a fanfic thats centered on narrative and not constant action and adventure for a change. :twilightsmile: Keep it up 'cause you've just earned a new follower!

This was sweet and kind of heart warming. I liked it, a lot. I'm still smiling. :twilightsmile:
It was a great take on cutie marks and nice to read a story with Cheerilee, she needs more love.

:yay:

Very well written story. I never knew you had this much creativity in your psyche. Definitely continue writing stories and you'll only get better than you are now.

I'll be honest with you....

I'm still new to the whole phenomenon which is the ever-so-cool "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" franchise but even I can appreciate such as well thought out and well written story such as this one.

It was short, sweet and straight to the point, making it feel like it could be part of a series of small animated stories officially released on the actual TV show. It is THAT GOOD.

I don't care what they say.... you ARE now "20% Cooler". ;)

How did I not find this beauty sooner? :raritystarry:

A very cute and sweet tory Excellently done. you really have a talent for creating sweet and gentle short slices of life.

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