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The Pimp Writer
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Not gonna lie, pretty interesting way to respect your dead friends' bodies, especially after a traumatizing event. Why did I enjoy this? I dunno. But I will say, I wish for more. Does this make me a sinner?
A dead body, no. Several, yes.
Not gonna lie, this is one of the best ones I've read.
I'll admit - I was kind of expecting a nasty twist to the ending, like a returning guard.finding uim and making the natural assumption he was a very, very sick 'ling to put down.
He is gonna be sooooooo fucked in the head by the time anyone gets back there, especially once all those calories he's burning catch up with him.
This was one of the better necro stories I've read. Also, Hail Slaanesh.
Another necro (I hope you don't do this in real life)
anyways let's talk about the review. I think it's better than his first when he wrote it. It's 100% true on that. There for still a bit rushed. It needs to be longer. And the rating of this fiction is 6/10.
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If enjoying this makes you a sinner, who the heck wants to be a saint?
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Well, they're just lying there otherwise, right?
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There's a none zero chance of this getting a sequel, so I'll definitely file those ideas away for later.
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Hail Slaanesh!
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Not all of my fetishes extend to real life (including those that aren't really possible), and even the ones that do are only done in a safe and consensual environment.
So, no need to worry about me doing lewd things with dead bodies. Heck, idk where I'd even find one.
Big fan!
This is the good, gross shit
good job!
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Elton John plays in the Background...
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This is so hot ♥w♥
It's a shame Ocellus wasn't used, or Gallus getting over his "no homo" thing. It isn't gay if one of them's dead :3
This was fun even if it was Antrho, although I do have a few points of feedback.
First, I liked the romantic approach you took to the lead in with Smoulder. It created an excellent dissonance and set the scene for the rest of this very well.
Second, the lack of mangling was a bit odd and disappointing. This setup was perfect for bodies to be seriously mangled, and what you said about Ocellus in particular made it extremely odd that they didn't hack her to pieces and do something amusing with her.
Third, I think it would have been absolutely hilarious if Fluttershy had walked in on him at the end. She's an obvious candidate for surviving by hiding in a corner until everything blows over, and her timidity means she would have taken a long time to build up the courage to follow up on his call so it makes sense for her to show up late.
You are a fucking great author, are you new? I'll be watching with great interest
Ngl, this was both sickening and arousing.Something about anthro creatures getting killed in a sudden and brutal way gets me.And, as some sort of feedback:I don't like that the story is so short.It would've been nice if it had more chapters, detailing the attack, the deaths, the sex and Gallus slowly becoming insane
WHAT FUC* IS THIS!???