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DragonsPonies
dragon butt enthusiast - now also trying some writing!
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Are there really not that many Smolder stories on this site?
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there's a fair few, though comparitavely to other characters not so much. not too many nsfw ones especially.
This was pretty good. It definitely hit my interests, so I'm probably biased. Then again, everybody has preferences and disinterests and every story will have its admirers, so I'll ignore my blatant slant towards this
delicious setting and contentstory.You've made the storyline clear, you've kept the characters pretty much in-line with their characterisations within the show but allowed for the NSFW content (which definitionally will never be presented in a kids show), and you've got good descriptive writing. It did what it was supposed to; tell an erotic story and keep the audience interested.
There's only a few things to criticise, but that's just around sentence structure and repetitive vocab in some places, which will get better with practice and experience. All in all, very good. Keep it up.
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Thanks a bunch!
This comment made my day, hah. totally fair on repetitive sentences/words, certainly something i can improve on, and something i'll try to improve on when i get into writing another story. thanks for the feedback!
Hehe, fun!
This was actually well done. Thank you for the naughty story. ^^
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and thank you for the compliment!
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let's hope the interest is well placed!
Im glad you wrote this :>
Definitely enjoyed this one.
This was good. Any chance of a followup? I wouldn't mind Gallus giving it to both Smolder and Ocellus.
Great stuff, love it. Just weird and unique enough to be a ton of fun to read.
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potentially! i'm doubting between either writing something new when i have the time or making another chapter for this one. very tough choice!
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thank you! hope it's a good kind of weird
Dude this is great. I'm surprised this is your first story here!
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If you don't mind me asking, where might I find the cover picture for this story?
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Derpibooru ID: 2844024
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Thank you kindly.