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Dark Tail
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Dark Tail
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So who was the dragon and his 'roommate' (yeah right, roommate...that screams couple to me
) Smoulder banged with? It can't be Spike since he sleeps at the castle or with somepony like Starlight Glimmer or Rarity...
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Probably a fun story I might play around with some day. But leave up to you to speculate till then.
Ocellus eating out smolder as a sea pony was my fav part
I enjoyed this quite a lot, even without a fetish for water or streaking/being caught. The light-hearted tone is just really nice. I also liked Silverstream being the architect of this, very cheeky.
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TBQH Spike + Starlight sound the most likely. We're pretty short on male dragon characters: Sludge would be gross, Torch is impossible, Garble I don't believe Dark Tail is into incest, I guess people sometimes use Fizzle? Spike (and maybe Sludge) is the only one not living in Dragon Lands and like what, is Ember going to turn out to be Fizzle's roommate or "roommate"? We're left with the possibility of these just being OCs.
Edit: D'oh, just realized that since Spike doesn't have a literal roommate anyway, Gabby is more likely for "roommate" since it avoids Smolder having fucked any of the school staff.
Ok, I can't stop thinking of Ocellus being Ozzy now! Just keep her away from bats
“Ocellus get the dick she earned it” i don't know why but i was in stitches after reading that line it was really funny to me
Great story overall as well
With how you ended this. Having another story could work too
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Well I did have one idea where Smolder would be trying to get Ocellus to enjoy her wild side a bit more. Maybe take her to the Dragon lands where they are less prude so that she could feel more confident in showing off more. We'll see what happens but that's what I am playing around with currently.
I loved it, I wish there would be a sequel and this time with yona sandbar, and silver stream joining in on the streaking escapades.
id love to see 2 bonus chapters, one with the CMC and one with silverstream
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Already got the CMC in the works.
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i can not wait to see what you have planned for the cmc
Always nice when a second hot scene is teased in the main story, and then a bonus chapter comes out to show that hot scene in all it's glory~
Wait so is the school also a college then lol since the CMC have to be aged up (anthro rules) how old would that make gallus celly and smoulder also glad to see you took someone's comment about silver setting them up and ran with it
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I always figured that the CMC were probably around teenage years by the end of the series. (The animators wanted them to look older starting season 4 but Hasbro forbid it.) So yeah, probably college by the time they were adults. The school sort of felt like it could work as one.
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it was a cute moment also already said on ypur page but your portrail lf celly is adorable cocky badass abd sexy and i hope she shows up more
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plus lol the comment at smoulder sleeping naked in the open how many times was spike like nope nope nope when she did it damnit lol now im tempted to make a quick oneshot of his reactions to the varius times its happend and the varius poses she could have been in
Look forward to what that possible sequel will be about. Also great work with the bonus chapter.
Some nice situations in this story. I just wish they could have had a little more time with those situations to enjoy it. They always got interrupted too soon.
(The bonus chapter avoided this, making it much more satisfying. Though overuse if the pronoun ‘her’ made it confusing at times.)
Nice to see someone actually using Ocellus’s ability to transform, though! Really not enough clopfics use that. I’d love to see her transform into somepony else (like Twilight or something) in order to play a sexy prank on her friends. Oh no! The headmare caught us naked! But … she’ll let us go if we have sex with her? So hot! And then Ocellus reveals that it was her all along.
(But, anyway, couldn’t Ocellus just transform into a disguise who’s wearing clothes? That would have solved a lot of their problems.)
Oh, and am I the only one who thinks Ocellus turned herself into a siren, not a seapony?
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These are the kinds of comments I wish I got more often. Constructive criticism I can use to improve and some fun ideas to work off of for later.