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Great story with a cute ending. Do you have a sequel in mind?

Perhaps a sequel with fluttershy taking a turn on spike's spike.

Not bad. Perhaps a sequel of them enjoying their new cohabitation?

You, my friend just inspired me for my next fic, many thanks.

I expect to see a sequel. This was too good to not need one.

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Well... Guess I will get to work on that sequel. :twilightsmile:

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You don't have too. I was just suggesting.

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No its cool, I was debating on it anyways. You all just helped me nail down a decision is all. :twilightsheepish:

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Alright then. Hope to see it.

wow. this it rilly good

Looking forward to that sequel. From what I read you could easily do all the main six and maybe a few others. You, my good writer, have a fav, a fallow, and a new eager reader. Well done :yay:

PS. If you're going to turn this into a series, I'd recommend getting a editor. I noticed a few errors while I was reading, nothing major though. :twilightsmile:

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I'd recommend getting a editor

a fallow

Muphry's Law strikes again. (Granted, you weren't suggesting yourself as an editor, but it's still funny)

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:derpytongue2: usually it's grammar not spelling that I have trouble with....I made a :derpyderp2::facehoof:

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Actually I do have someone but they sadly don't come on as often anymore. But I'll try to catch them before I release the sequel. Might get lucky.

Goddamn this was kinky

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Always nice when the person I was actually talking to is a good sport about it. It turns the downvotes I receive after they've already posted as such into a chuckleworthy gaffe on the part of people who don't want to be seen.

Man, I kinda wanna see more. Is that weird

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Well I could always look it over. Though as you saw, I can't guarantee I'll find everything :fluttershyouch:

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Its cool. When I do finish it, I'll be sure to give it a few more re-reads before posting as well. :twilightsmile:

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👍 Look forward to it.

Somehow, Rarity in the thumbnail kinda looks like Kairi from Kingdom Hearts.

You almost lost all credibility, putting Rarity in cargo pants. Luckily she amended that in the end.

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Huh, she kind of does.

This was a unique concept:raritystarry:. I honestly would love to see a sequel to this.:pinkiehappy:

where did you get the Cover picture from?

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Link to the artist is there. Just click on the picture.

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I concur, a sequel is desired.

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Sequel is on the way. Goal is to have it done within about a week or so.

Rarity would say "Ravish me!" in all earnestness. :duck:

She had to admit, it was kind of erotic. Being trapped in a cave with a Dragon while revealing herself, even just slightly to him.

:moustache:: "It's true!"

She was sporting just her coat, open with her breasts just barely peaking out and what remained of her cargo pants, now cut off and turned into a miniskirt. Rarity glanced down at herself. "You know, if hadn't saddled my life into Gem design, I probably could have made a great fashion designer."

Maybe in another (equine) live...


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

Not bad. Not bad at all!

She'll be craving for him.

Very nice work here

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Where be this sequel?

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Top right corner of the screen under sequels. :twilightsmile:

Hey, this was fun. Props on re-imagining Rar' in a way that stays consistent with her mark.

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