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Link for the cover art?

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SFW version can be found by clicking on the picture. NSFW version can also be found there.

Yay for Smolcellus! Very exhilarating.

With the amount of delays and redirections Ocellus suffered on her quest, I kind of expected Smolder to go
"Oh! Uhhhhh, sorry. I completely forgot. I also left my key in the room."
"WHAT!"
"You walked in in nothing but a sweater! And dripping! I was distracted!"

(Also would have been really funny if Silverstream was coming from the direction of the showers carrying a spare robe :raritywink:)

Congrats. You got featured. :raritywink:

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Wow. That's a first. 0.0

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You deserve it. This story's great and Ocellus is rather cute xD

why not do both streaking and skinny dipping?

i would vote on the skinny dipping if all young six is in it.

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Oh, I like the way you think. :ajsmug:

...I don't see a sweater, though...

Ocellus as able to relax in warmth

*Was.

before Heartswarming break

*Hearths Warming - they're not warming hearts or the Crystal Heart or any Pure Hearts or Kingdom Hearts.

The new locks Head Mare Starlight put in

I never understood this; Twilight put an ex-cult leader in charge of a school, full of very impressionable youngsters. Being a cult leader isn't something you can accidentally blunder into, unlike manslaughter (mareslaughter?), kidnapping (e.g. stealing a car, but not realising there's a baby in the back, or infamously taking the President onto a train without realising his bodyguards missed getting on), or theft (taking something you didn't know belonged to someone) - instead, becoming a cult leader takes conscious effort, a ton of manipulative thinking, and time.
Even if Starlight's supposedly 'reformed', getting rid of a long-held, deeply-ingrained mindset isn't easy, especially when psychologist visits were never mandatory - and Twilight's not a psychologist or a psychiatrist of any kind. I would not make Starlight a Headmare whatsoever without clear proof of treatment from a certified mental health expert.

And their is no way she would

*There.

Thankfully, weekends meant less other creatures around

*Fewer, not less; fewer's for easily-countable quantities (e.g. individual objects or beings), while less is for general amounts (e.g. liquids, powders).

the feeling of her breasts grinding against her friends

*Friend's, with an apostrophe; without one, it's referring to multiple friends, not something belonging to just one.

She was surprised to see that no one was in there

If she was expecting the place to be empty, then she would be "unsurprised".

I wouldn't mind a sequel about Ocellus, Smolder, and Gallus sneaking naked back to the dorms. Perhaps they get horny and end up in a threesome in the process? :3

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Thanks, I'll go back and fix those errors later today when I have time. :twilightsmile:

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That's sort of the idea I had in mind. Maybe some pool fun thrown in there as well. Keep an eye out, I am going to work on it this weekend.

Smolder shrugged her shoulders. "Probably doesn't help that I came here in nothing but a robe either... That I also can't find." That may have also just so happened to have found their way to the towel deposit.

*Facepalm*

Can you do other couples too?

I wish there was more of silverstream and Yona, I bet yona is nice and thic right?

I would love to see more please

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Got a sequel and a follow-up Just Be Confident. Really love this couple so more in the works as well.

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i read the sequel and im going to read the followup soon

Hot damn this is kinky hehe plus Dom celly is best celly buff said

Did I get it right that all the action took place in the stallion's locker room? I wonder if Smolder wanted to get caught by the boys.

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She is kind of a kinky dragon. :ajsmug:

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