Smolder's Party Crash

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Deergenerate

Deergenerate #1 · Dec 3rd, 2020 · 1 · ·

This story was pretty great!

Would have loved to see more come from some of the other characters tho lol

Like Ember, Gallus, Sandbar, Silverstream and Thorax being the big ones. Would have loved to see a more detailed depiction of both The orgy and the two birds and their horse bud going at it.

That is just nitpicking/asking for more when I already have enough lol. Overall I enjoyed reading this one, but for my money, I think Just Be Confident is the best Smolcellus story on fimfiction right now, at least clop-wise. XD

Dark Tail

Dark Tail #2 · Dec 3rd, 2020 · · ·

Thanks and Just Be Confident still remains one my favorites to have ever written. I am getting that writing bug back so I might look into doing something like that again soon.

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #3 · Aug 28th, 2022 · · ·

Your stories have this annoying habit of turning away and not giving it the attention it deserves just as it gets to the good part.

Tons of buildup, but then when things truly get steamy, it’s over in just a paragraph or two. Definitely could have used more details on the orgy scene, longer shower scene, and much longer Silverstream scene.

Dark Tail