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kazamacat


You can call me Cat. I'm obsessed with Rainbow Dash. She/her.

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Rainbow Dash lost control of her vampire power five hundred years ago, and she's never been the same mare since.

Numerous ponies find themselves caught in the web of this vindictive killer's game.

Sweetie Belle is one such pony.

Twilight Sparkle was Rainbow's partner for life until that day. A vampire as well, she regained control of her power back then but became the eternal target of Rainbow's vengeance thereafter.

Crimson, the vampire who turned Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle, didn't know Rainbow would turn on Twilight, but is otherwise proud of her being his legacy.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 24 )

Interesting decision to make Sweetie Belle and Apple bloom NOT related to Rarity and AJ in this.

I kind of hope Scoots somehow reconciles with Dash, even if that's highly unlikely

I kind of hope Crimson gets what's coming to him, considering he was responsible for everything

Great chapter!

If Twilight had not accidentally told Crimson about Scootaloo, woul he have still find out about her anyway?

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Very likely, yes.

Great chapter!

"Sure," Rainbow said. "It helps make fools like these guys. Ponies hear somebody made it out alive, and they think 'oh you just say the right words, make the right deal'. Then they think the beast is something they can kill or capture.

Should it be somepony?

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No, it should not. I read it aloud for the final proofread before I posted and didn't like how "Ponies hear somepony" sounded, so I actually deliberately changed it to "somebody". I liked how that sounded better, and non-pony creatures have been part of the story already.

You’re welcome and thank you! Great chapter and great story!

Right on cue, Apple Bloom stepped out from the darkness, two vampiric red eyes visibly gazing at Sweetie Belle.

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Jesus, this is even better than all the other vampire rainbow dash fanfics that I’ve read, besides one of course.

So is not completely under rainbow dashes control
Says she doesnt want to be a vampire
Gwt turned somewhat
Kills her lover and then becomes under her control
That makes no scene in vampire lore

She eaither rainbow could comtrol her from the start or sweetiebelle never really like apple bloom and just wanted vampirism

good read, 10/10. didn't expect twidash to be here

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