The Body Electric

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Donttouchmysqueenus

Donttouchmysqueenus #1 · Aug 17th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Think you have mixed your kink tags from your previous fic. No celestia, twilight, midnight or cumflation here.

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Aug 17th, 2020 · · ·

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Oooh, sorry about that. Thanks for looking out, mate.

M4Tiger4014

M4Tiger4014 #3 · Aug 17th, 2020 · 1 · ·

♫ Electricity, EEEEELECTRICITY ♫

Are you really referencing what I think you’re referencing?

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #4 · Aug 18th, 2020 · · ·

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I may be, yes.

M4Tiger4014

M4Tiger4014 #5 · Aug 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Vis-a-Viscera, you sneaky, clever, sonofabitch!

Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #6 · Aug 18th, 2020 · · ·

It was bad enough tjat she'd completely missed woken up to the end of Ponyville’s rain-storm alone in bed. But as Carrot Top yawned from her second doze0off,

Fire whoever proofread this. How on earth did they miss the "that" and the "doze off"? Both of which are in the first sentence?

...Unless that second one was stylistic. Which is bizarre.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #7 · Aug 18th, 2020 · · ·

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Whoa boy, somehow that got away from me. Fixed with the quickness.

citrusorange

citrusorange #8 · Aug 18th, 2020 · 2 · ·

You know, I just kinda read these sorts of works as a past time and wonder why I even bother with something meant entirely for jacking off, but I guess a homie gotta appreciate the writing quality sometimes. Even though I have no idea what is going on. Good writing, mi amigo.

Skeeter The Lurker