Nice to see an update! Another great chapter!

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Thanks, anything to comment on?

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Action was great, and it was good to see Dash show up! Dizzy’s accent was a little difficult to parse for me occasionally, but overall a fun chapter!

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She's Irish sounding.

Pretty awesome fight scenes all around. Twilight is coming through as a badass, but also reckless almost to the point of self-harm. A serious spinal injury and missing foreleg, and she's still running around bipedal and jumping down stairs with heavy amounts of combat drugs in her system.

I kinda hope Celestia or Vee just pull her off duty for a bit, separate from recovery time. She's pushing herself through a lot. That's probably not an option with Rainbow being personally targeted by the Jackals for whatever reason.

Great story, can't wait for more. Though I wonder if Noctis has a slight crush on Twilight without realizing it and vice versa(also without realizing it). Noctis was ordered by Luna to make sure that Twilight didn't perish and he did that when he brought her to the CAM after she passed out from lack of power; he had no reason to keep tabs on her afterwards or to stay with her during her surgery or walk around with her after she woke up after the surgery but he did both. As for Twilight, she was nice (not to be confused with her being polite, since a person can both hate someone and be polite to said person at the same time, for context: ask anybody who had to deal with a rude customer/karen at their job) to him after waking up from her 'coma'.