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Is this anthro?
Good God I need to expand my vocabulary. This is amazing!
THIS is why I read Mature Sex Fics. For the story and for the story only. These kinds of fics that include both real story and sex are rare, but that's what makes it all the more rewarding when you find them. Here's to hoping your fic makes it to the featured list! It deserves it!
It's quite entertaining to watch Chrysalis as a kind of "forest dryad - seductress in the forest."
this is cute.
probably this is due to the fact that the second chapter has changed its vector from one aspect to another.
for some reason I had the idea that in the end Chrysalis would resist with her "instincts of the female praying mantis after mating". Glad it wasn't.
I'm also interested in seeing the clash of two different cultures and how both sides learn something new about each other's lives.
P.S. I wonder if Chrysalis knows that Ponies have to eat material food? It would be sad if her "ideal" husband died a month later from starvation.
Decided to pick it up because of the romance tag and that it was high on the featured tab, and was not disappointed. A really lovely little vignette thing here, simple but deep and interesting worldbuilding mixed with a fun and believable start to a romance
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Thanks.
I do prefer an M-rated sex story that has some build up to it.
Be the change you wish to see and all that jazz.
A Chrysalis story? My my, I have missed these. I will follow you, fellow author. Keep up the good work.
Ah, I See You're a Man of Culture As Well...
I... THIS might be the greatest Chryssy fic I've read. With your, frankly, unreal depictions of feelings, I am blown away.
just wow
Can we possibly get a sequel or continuation of this? It is soooo good!
Poor stallion or lucky stallion?
I would have expected she would prefer apex ponies, because they were much more fun to toy with.
They would try to resist her, trying to dominate her as they dominate their fellow ponies. Attempts which have no chance of succeeding.
Of course she could simply crush them easily, but she will take her time to teach them.
Slowly and carefully, so they wouldn't even notice being tamed.
Literally, as in growing tentacles and yeet him to the next pony village? (Also you have one just too many.)
So the ponies already have computers?
Would that be better or worse for him?
Good premise!
After reading the description I expected an more aggressive hunt, like something involving running, hiding and (physically) fighting.
But this is even better.
Now I look forwards to read what will happen in "Not exactly a village". Even though you already gave a hint in the Author's Note.
Chrysalis: "Don't worry, It'll only get more interesting from here. Far more interesting..."
Not only the males, I suspect.
Can't blame him.
At this point he might even be okay with that.
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
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Did you notice the Anthro tag?
No? Me neither. So the answer is no.
It was certainly different, but not better or worse. Merely different.
In a good way.
I really love both how Chrysalis and the changelings as a whole are characterized, and the changeling lore presented in this story is very interesting. I also enjoyed the interactions between Pale Dew and Chrysalis. This is definitely one of my favorite Chrysalis stories I've read, if not the favorite.
You can has review!
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Ta!
This was honestly super cute