Sweetie Belle returns home after a night out, drunk and looking for more alcohol. Before her search can begin, however, some familiar ponies intervene.
Content Warning for: potential language, polyamorous Cutie Mark Crusaders, and drunken Sweetie Belle.
Idea from the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Muse Contest #2, where stories were inspired from a playlist and written within an hour.
Song from playlist used: "Sober Up" by AJR (feat. Rivers Cuomo).
A thank you to The Red Parade for proofreading before publishing.
Chapters (1)
Call an ambulance, because my heart is melting!
This is a cute little scene. I'd love to read more of the poly cmc 'verse
This is adorable, Bill! I love poly cmc, and this story does justice to them and their dynamic. I second 10275294, I'd love more of these three!
Poly CMC is honestly one of my favorite ships
I'd also be interested in seeing more poly CMC. I've never poly-shipped them with one another, but you pulled it off nicely, and in such a short word count too.
I always hate when I read these and see “full five minutes”. Really? Sweetie Belle was looking into the fridge for *three hundred seconds*? Set a timer on your phone for five minutes, then go open your fridge and wait until the timer goes off.
“An overly long time” or “far too long” or “what seemed like forever” all work here without the literal absurdity of using “minute” where it does not make sense.