When one of Twilights teleportation spells goes haywire, the Mane 6 find themselves not in Canterlot, as was originally planned, but in the backyard of a house on the Gold Coast in Australia. In this house lives Rebecca, a Brony, who's family is on holiday.
Will Rebecca be able to help the Mane 6 get back to Equestria before her family gets home? Will the the Mane 6 want to go home? Will we ever understand why Pinkie Pie does what she does?... Probably not, but read on for he answers.
I'll try to upload a chapter each week, though with school and stuff it might not be possible. Enjoy!
lol First like to see where this is going
When I saw the title
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When I read it
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Keep it going!
*reads title
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To you, I give my highest regards.
CONTINUE THE AMAZING!
Gold Coast?
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But I'm also noticing that there are a lot of mistakes in grammar along with spelling. I suggest reading it aloud to pick up on them and using dictionary.com if you don't know how to spell a word, but keep up the good work.
ERM MER GERRRD PEEERNIES
also ..... they seem to be taking in the whole im in a new world thing kinda quickly dont u think?
1141641 Not all of the Gold Coast is considered bad And I'm trying my best with spelling and grammer
Glad you like it
DO NOT I REPEET DO NOT LET PINKIE PLAY XBOX 360
mmmmm cake......
Wow, this is an AWESOME story! Great job!
Pretty good, please keep up the good work :)
The chapters are extremely short... I'm not sure if I wanna read this
1507630 I tried writing more but the words escape me
MOAR. This is great. Maybe if the chapters were a bit longer though...
My chapters are the antithesis of yours. I write for an hour and a half once I get going xD each chapter of my newer story is around 500-1000 words each. It's sad toured are t like that. I could read this all day! It's great!
Toured= yours
Are t= aren't
I hate the size of the iPhone keyboard buttons... + autocorrect
I'm suffering artists and writer's block
I'm glad you like my story
As to your question, yes, you need to submit your story
Australia!?
Let us have a moment of Silence for them....
2322034 its ok, us Australians have survived this land for a long time. they will be fine as long as they don't meet any spiders.
2322475 Or snakes, or boxing kangaroos, or angry emus, or soaking wet koalas... they look evil
2322482 dont forget the flies..... bloody flies everywhere ... they called me crazy BUT I KNOW WHAT THERE PLANING the flies will take over the world!AND THEN YOU WILL ALL BELIEVE ME!!!111!!
2322504 Along with their mosquito and midge troops, which will drink us dry and spread disease
2322544 oh and then theres the bloody crocodiles... can go 2 steps without seeing one or one jumping on ur car
2322837 Yeah, it's amazing anyone can even live here! We have the worlds most venomous snake (Coastal Taipan) and many other deadly animals! Baby eating dingos, man eating crocs, evil soaked koalas, how do we survive!?
2322852 the answer... we are all super saiyans
Its ok but the chapters are a tad short?
2551159 I try to make them longer, but I find I can only write a little at a time, and I like to get that little bit as quick as possible since I don't update much
2551260 oh... ok i see then i dont mind.... ill just read other storries inbetween update....
2551274 Check out my other stories
(my inital reaction, before reading)
g'day mate, i've never seen a talking horse before
(my reaction now)
nope, its actually good
2594247 Glad you like it!
2594254
No offense, but good luck Mane Six. Australia is known as the land where everything is trying to kill you-no really. X( See the "Australia" section of this article.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EverythingTryingToKillYou
There was even a song about it. X-0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wy_TB6onHVE
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QFT, poor ponies. My native Texas is supposed to be a rough place to live in some parts, but at least we wiped out most of the big cats and all of the wolves and bears ages ago. Fire ants? Smack them off with your hand and get away from the mound. Killer Bees? Don't stand there smacking them, run like Hell! Rattlesnakes give off their warning rattles and water moccasins give off a stench you can smell a mile away. Yeah, I feel bad for the Mane Six. I hope their local guide is some sort of a Bogan or Aboriginal bad-flank that can eat crocs for breakfast and treat box jelly stings as a minor annoyance-in other words, a relative of Saxton Hale. X-/ Again, don't get mad folks, I keed. I would like to visit Oz someday, despite the health risks, maybe I'm nuts, I dunno.
9 chapters and not dead yet? Oh right, Suburban Australia...
2594335 I've lived in Australia my whole 18 years of life and the deadliest creatures I've come across that aren't in zoos of someones pets, are various spiders and a very large python of some sort I nearly stood on one night in 2005 while walking with my family. It's actually pretty safe, at least, in the populated areas. I've been injured more by manmade things, namely 2 heavy glass doors falling on me and breaking my leg in 2003 and a ball fracturing my finger in 2006 whilst playing soccor or something for P.E. Anyway, in the story I am their guide, along with my friend, so they should be safe, I need to think up the next chapter though, so maybe they won't be
2594346 Populated areas are very safe Unless gangs are shooting people in other gangs in cities and places
2594359 I hope you don't run into Bunyips or Drop Bears or a Megalania. X-/
2594401 Koalas aren't bears And bunyips are basically Australia's bigfoot
RAINBOW DASH YOU DID THIS!
2594406 Koalas are Marsupials
2594613 Correct ^.^
2594644 SA is safer!
2594675
Somehow, Australia the land of "EVERYTHING IS TRYING TO KILL YOU!" was declared the SEVENTH safest country of 2012-13!
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/EverythingTryingToKillYou (See "Australia" Section near the bottom of the page.)
2594406
I didn't name them. :( Ppl call Mountain Lions lions even though they're not.
2594359
They run into a Drop Bear? :?
Of course, maybe I'm giving the Mane Six too little credit. I mean, how many of us would last a day in the Everfree Forest? It's like a Kiddie Version of the planet Catachan from Warhammer 40K!
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No, everyone in your country is SAXXXTOOONNN HAAALLLEEEE!!!!!
2678949 Lol
'Come to Australia' was made by comedians. I've never seen most of those deadly animals listed outside of zoo's and tv
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Have you figured out how you're going to explain how Twiley seems to be clueless about interacting w/ humans in "Equestria Girls" even though she's visited Humans in Australia in your fanfic? :?
2683108 Alternate timeline or something were EQG never happens?
2684111
Okie-Dokey-Lokey.