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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off.

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Have you ever watched paint dry? This story is a lot like that, but darker.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 8 )

Imaginative yet playful with minute language discrepancies. Welcome to this website and I hope to see your stories up here!

I think your cover art might’ve gotten messed up (or is it supposed to be a question mark?).

Other than that, this was a really nice little pair of stories. I definitely wouldn't mind seeing some sort of continuation of this, that's for sure.

Have a Thumbs Up! Best of luck in the future!
:)

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Thank you for your kind words.

Next time I'll try for bigger, more exciting language discrepancies. :pinkiehappy:

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I'm giad the constraint I mentioned in my second Author's Note seems to have worked out well for you.

I considered writing one or more additional chapters with a recurring pattern that each chapter's end should work (adequately or better) as the end of the entire multi-chapter series. But there are so many other things I could write instead if I find the time.

Dark! But still fun.

Don't stare into the abyss paint to long pinkie lest it start to stare back.

:rainbowlaugh: The pinkie pie experimental military anti-twilight weapons division would certainly be a sight to see.

Its just so wong for her to grab the paint bucket and go back to the wall. It got a laugh, but this silly story of pony existential dread has no resolution!

Maby thats the point.

Would love another chapter to this tho.

A very Pinkie Pie kind of thoughtful one-shot.
I don't think I've read one like this before.

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