A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)
What's it like, knowing one of your best friends tried to kill almost everypony in the world who looked like you?
Sometimes Pinkie Pie would wake up from a nightmare, and remember.
Soon she started hoarding cans of paint...for her own protection, she said. But that was only the beginning.
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Imaginative yet playful with minute language discrepancies. Welcome to this website and I hope to see your stories up here!
I think your cover art might’ve gotten messed up (or is it supposed to be a question mark?).
Other than that, this was a really nice little pair of stories. I definitely wouldn't mind seeing some sort of continuation of this, that's for sure.
Have a Thumbs Up! Best of luck in the future!
:)
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Thank you for your kind words.
Next time I'll try for bigger, more exciting language discrepancies.
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I'm giad the constraint I mentioned in my second Author's Note seems to have worked out well for you.
I considered writing one or more additional chapters with a recurring pattern that each chapter's end should work (adequately or better) as the end of the entire multi-chapter series. But there are so many other things I could write instead if I find the time.
Dark! But still fun.
Don't stare into the
abysspaint to long pinkie lest it start to stare back.Its just so wong for her to grab the paint bucket and go back to the wall. It got a laugh, but this silly story of pony existential dread has no resolution!
Maby thats the point.
Would love another chapter to this tho.
A very Pinkie Pie kind of thoughtful one-shot.
I don't think I've read one like this before.
I'm kindoff sad there was no resolution with Twilight here
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I'm kind of sad because I can't tell if you ever tried to read "Bonus Chapter #2," or just skipped right to the end and forgot that you didn't read the story.
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I did, read the entire thing. I meant that Pinkie never talked to Twilight about her fears and Twilight really listening. I get that they talked, but Pinkie still fears Twilight. Unless there's something I missed. I thought I read the whole thing.
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Ah! You are quite right about this, in the larger sense of Pinkie still fearing that Twilight might make a mistake when trying to destroy somepony's extra Mirror Pool copies. Pinkie has made progress, but her fears for other ponies aren't entirely over.
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I got that, it makes sense. My original comment wasn't a criticism of a story, just a wish it had had a happy ending. I'm not saying its a worse story for it having the ending it had, its probably better. I was just being wistful of the imaginary happy ending I want all stories and all of life to have.
For a fake, test story, this could almost be added to headcanon.
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I did decide to change that, thanks.
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Thank you!
I suppose it turns out I more easily write a REAL story than a 'fake, test' one...whatever my theoretical original intent might have been.
