What happens when Princess Twilight Sparkle marries The Lord of Chaos?
Happily Ever Afters are for everypony right?
Or maybe not all fairy tales are meant to have a happy ending.
Hello fellow readers! My name is Vocal Sweets. I am a 25 year old unicorn mare. Book-lover & coffee lover by day, Writer by Night
What happens when Princess Twilight Sparkle marries The Lord of Chaos?
Happily Ever Afters are for everypony right?
Or maybe not all fairy tales are meant to have a happy ending.
Im at Chapter 2 right now
and so far im really dissapointed
The starting concept is completely stolen from 'Embracing Chaos' and the Characters, as well as the pacing of the Story is absolutely unconsistant and kinda all over the place. Too much stuff is happening at the same time without any good explainations.
You should really consider getting proof, and pre-readers for your story.
but ill stay on it and give regular feedback throughout the Chapters
~Chris
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First off, I didn’t “steal” any concept.
I wrote this story back in 2018 after that I didn’t step back here for a year or so. Plus I have never even heard of a story called Embracing Chaos :
Didn’t like some of the scenes that I wrote for it so I redone some of it/added new ones in.
Also this is AU.
Shouldn't there be a tragedy tag, then?
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Fixed
You preside over a wedding, not resign which means to quit.
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Thank you for the correction, fixing it now
I did not want to wait for your video of this fanfic
I have to say you did a good job on it
being a Twibra fan in all, I love the ending
I watched that entire series along with daughter of Discord.
Also, is this an alternate universe, because Flurry is obviously older than she ever was in the show, and Twilight would have been ruling Equestria by then. But this takes place before the end of season 8.
This has to be in an alternate universe. Spike isn’t living in the dragon lands and isn’t a father in the show
Vocal You Are Awesome!!!!!!
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Yep this series is AU. It's basically a big "what if" novel.
This is a line from the lion king isn't it?
Really good story :)
mystic telling starlight to hook up with trixie is hilarious! those 2 stink at hiding their crushes on each other
Hercules reference!!!