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BubblePuff


I am a brony and a long time writer. This site will be for my MLP fanfiction, and you can read my other works on Deviantart.com under the name potsticker13.

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The pacing seemed a bit fast here. Other than that, I'll be keeping an eye on this. I can't remember the last time someone besides me wrote a smutty pregnancy story!

Why not use the Main 7 (EqG) tag?

Please don’t forget about this fanfic I deafly want to know how it ends

This is... interest8ng, I like it

Cant wait to see what happens to the rest of the group. Looking to Applejack, Rarity and Fluttershy, which should be very interesting.

The question is how far the story will push our characters and what happens at the end of this road

When is the next chapter coming up

So will there be any other affects to the girls bodies, maybe larger busts or larger ass-cheeks?

Sunset and Rainbow Dash both got up and walked over to Rarity to give her a group huge.

Should be "hug".

“Yeah, we’re belly buddies!” Rainbow Dash said as she put her arms around Sunset and Rarity.

I think that's something Pinkie would be more likely to say.

Also, when Rarity got a message from Twilight, was it a text or a voicemail?

Edit: Don't be afraid to get as graphic as possible with the sex scenes. Have the Nightwalker lick them, grab their breasts, etc.

Well, 3 down, minimum 4 more to go, if not more.

The question is how will this end?

Will the new nightwalkers be born or will they just disappear when the original night Walker is caught?

Maybe something else?

Cant wait to see who's next

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Why not, since they are pregnant in a sense shouldn't their bodies grow larger in certain area's?

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The breasts, yes, but I don't know about their butts.

Hmm, if this takes place after Backstage pass, they might know how to contact the Dazzlings. They could also be at risk. Not entirely sure since their magic is gone, but so is Wallflower's and Gloriosa's.

Who will be next? Fluttershy, Applejack, Twilight, or Pinkie?

The question is, even if this nightwalker can be defeated, will the girls stay pregnant?

This was a little too fast for my tastes. I appreciate the effort you put into this, though!

That being said, if there wasn't any pregnant sex, was the fetish tentacles?

Fast, expected and disappointing. It was an interesting ride, but the end was a little predictable once Twilight escaped.
Would have liked to see this go a little longer, and deal with the dreamwalker after the girls gave birth.
That would have been more dramatic and less predictable.

great job on story

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