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ROBCakeran53


"Ladies and Gentlemen, take my advice. Pull down your pants and slide on the ice." ~ Dr. Sidney Freedman, M*A*S*H S3 Ep5

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Can't say for certain if this will get the attention I feel it deserves, but it certainly was a pleasure working on this with you.

Also, pregnant sex clopshot when

Do they monogram toasters?

This really is the question for the ages...

Tab A and Slot B

doing it IKEA style, I see

Not to kill the mood on what's honestly a genuinely sweet and compelling story, but I can think of plenty of folks who would pay extra—or exclusively for—the reason you gave here.

Modern folks get all sorts of peculiar I tell you whut

Seriously, though, great job. :twilightsmile:

Nice story. I rather enjoyed it.

One miner thing though.-

talking with Missus Cake about when she was expecting

The use of Missus is a bit weird here. Missus is used as a stand alone title like "the Missus will be angry if she finds out," or "please have a seat, Missus." When used in conjunction with a name, its generally shortened to, [Mrs]. as in "Mrs. Cake."

This is the best kind of mature story--short, sweet, compelling. Well done.

Honestly, I think this was brilliant. Well done man.

A really strange premise, but it was very refreshing how much they were completely loyal to each other. A sweet, loving and completely faithful couple in a mature rated story is super rare and it was great to see them work everything out at the end.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

No, with a toaster.

This has fucking destroyed me. XD

That was absolutely amazing. Huge kudos to you and your editors, you all did an excellent job

This is lewd and comfy at the same time. Love it. Great job! Freglz is right, I'm sure there's niche work for sketches with pregnant mares. They could probably keep working until she foals. Of course I wouldn't say no to a follow up to see how they're family is getting along. Thanks for creating and sharing.

ROBCakeran53
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Thank you again, Fregz. It was a pleasure, and I'm really thankful for your help. Also lol, idk, I like the idea of doing mature themed stories where no actual sex happens, but who knows.
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It is! And they do! Or well, Sears used to, but not anymore...
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If that's not a sex position, then I need to make it one they made up on their own. I can see it now, modeling, and getting into a weird position. "Whats that?" "Oh, we call it the IKEA."

ROBCakeran53
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Thanks Rich, glad you enjoyed it.
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So I've seen it done both ways, and I'm more partial to actually spelling out both "mister" and "missus" unless it's signage, or signature, etc that would make it be Mr. or Mrs./Ms.
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

ROBCakeran53
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:twilightsmile:
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
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I mean, Tabs does want one, ya know.

ROBCakeran53
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
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Yeah, I mean, there's a lot of things people are into, and I know I don't immediately drop it as a possibility, but its niche, and it's an unknown territory for them. So who knows!

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

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I don't think she knows how toasters are made. :V

I loved this to pieces. Great stuff, made me laugh and feel all at the same time. The ending to chapter one practically made me fist-pump. I concur with everyone who says it didn't get the recognition it deserves. Please write more.

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