This story is a sequel to What We Really Want
On a lazy Saturday afternoon, Spitfire travels to Ponyville to spend the weekend with her boyfriend Jacob after being put on administrative leave for a week. Jacob has a surprise for her, in the form of something he calls Bionicles. A surprise visit from Twilight, however, causes a change in their previously thought up plans for their future.
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Another commission by the awesome Doomgooey which basically continues from the last one.
Pre-read and edited by the King of Slice of Life himself, Admiral Biscuit!
Cover art is by Wenni, used with permission! Thank you so much!
Also, this commission helped pay for new outer tierods for my mothers truck, so thanks! No more sloppy steering (for the time being).
THANOS CAR
I love how this turned out. Thanks a lot!
What was the pitch for this commission?
“Hey, you know that romance story I had you write with Spitfire?”
“Yeah?”
“Do a sequel but with Bionicles.”
“What?”
“I’ll pay you.”
“Say no more.”
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Actually, the weird thing is he asked for just a fic about Spitfire playing with Bionicles, and I'm the one that somehow twisted it into a sequel, and he liked it.
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Glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to write, and the next one's gonna be fun.
9176736
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
i see you are a man of culture such as myself
Gross. But the rest was quite relaxing. Cute story.
9177739
I mean, how else would pegasi do it mid-flight? In the aviation world we have things like "Travel Johns", but pegasi probably couldn't make one work that would be convenient.
Came for Bionicles, was not disappointed.
haven't even read it yet and i'm already pleased.
I feel like this story is going to have at least one more part.
I also feel cheated at how small of a part bionicles played in this story. =(
This story was silly, Bionicles were involved, 10/10.
9178254
Yeah, I realized afterwords that I've cheated people, so I'm gonna work on something to make up for the lack of Bionicleness later.
9178693
I was already happy, but now I get more Bionicles?!?! Heck yeah!
Absolutely amazing. I loved "What We Really Want" and was so happy to see a sequel for it. Any chance of getting another sequel soon? (I have to know what will happen now that the pink menace knows Jacob and Spitfire are engaged)
Well, as silly as the premise seems, this was pulled off very well. I liked it.
*Notices romance tag on a bionicle story*
Love isn't canon.
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Your face isn't canon.
I feel like most would be happy it's this kind of toy and not the other. Maybe she'll find the other under his bed some other day.
~SolidFire
9176577
I've heavily considered selling out my integrity for some really off the wall shit because money was involved...
>ROBCakeran53
That's a name I haven't heard in a long time, a long time.
9224987
A long time?
This was so cutely wonderful I died and am now dead. Just lovely.
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You can't die. You must write more horse words.
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Even in death I still serve.
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Even in death we are all but lost souls, awaiting the release to become what we are not, but a thing that's imagination could not formulate and make true, but prosperous.
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I'm sorry for blowing up your notifications, man, but you're good at what you do. I really admire your work and I look forward to more! This sequel was funny as hell. When she "relieved herself midflight", I almost spit my drink out.
Good stuff, once again!
9563237
Thanks! And yeah, that high up it would just disapate before it hit the ground.
9564138
Sounds about right.
Very enjoyable read, shame it took me so long to stumble across it. You absolutely have my permission to use the art and I'm glad the Spitfire Bionicle thing inspired people to make some great content!
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le gasp! You have a Fimmy Fic!? Well glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for making all the wonderful art that you have done, do, and will continue to do.