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The nature of daylight is fleeting and always succumbs to night as all things are temporary.
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Then why'd you add it?
Lel
Okay.
This was funny?
Anyway, I'm not sure how I would react if this happened to me. I love Twilight to bits, so I'd probably just be flabbergasted and very confused at first.
Fact is, I don't know if I'd even feel violated. A bit, yeah, but not even nearly as much as if anyone else did it. I think I'd just 'return the favor' and call it even.
Lemme be the first commenter on here to say I'm actually into it and would love to see more :P
Wierd but fun.
I know a mare who would go nuts about this story.
Would this technically qualify as rape?
Morality aside, this anonpencil-worthy material, right here.
This was a really fun read!
However, you should edit for the changes in perspective, you have 1st, 2nd, and 3rd person littered all across the story.
6/10
Funny
Not enough porn
This was a Freakazoid story but it was pretty fun
This is bloody weird but I like it
That’s…one of the oddest things I’ve read in a while and for some reason that surprises me. I mean, I know about clothing tf stuff, but this fell into a weird pseudo-tf zone that I’m not sure how to classify
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There's a similar story on this website by user
Nittany Discord
called Unusual Love. This kind of style of Tf isn't very popular on this website and is easier to find elsewhere.
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That was an interesting situation
Ok this was funny. Though i kinda want a sequel where after Anon punished Twilight he tries to get out of her body but because he is unfamiliar with magic or Twilight's hooves that he can't unzip himself and get out of her body. Then he goes around town trying to get Twi's friends to help unzip himself but due to Discord's magic "fail-safe" he can't get anypony except himself, Celestia or Discord to unzip and let him out of Twilight's body. But Discord being Discord he doesn't tell Anon that Celestia is able to remove him from Twilight. Thus Anon literally has to learn to use magic or learn how pony hooves work to get him out of Twilight's body or ask Discord to help. Which Discord will agree to if Anon can accept that he will be endlessly teased by Discord at every opportunity. Thus the story is set that Anon ends up be taught magic and how to be a pony and all the trappings of being female until he can get himself out of Twilight's body, all the while Twilight herself gets aroused by being his body suit that her more lewd thoughts start to invade Anon's mind adding a time limit before his and her thought's become one in the same thus meaning him and her are becoming one in the same. Then have 2 endings: One he learns enough of magic or being a pony that he get's out of Twilight's body before they become one entity and the second ending is bad for Anon but great for Twilight as they became one entity in both body and mind but sadly now Anon can no longer separate himself from Twilight mentally and physically the zipper disappears and he is strangely fine becoming one with Twilight in body and mind
You haven't completely edited out second-person version.
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I don't think I've edit it at all since releasing it. I could probably put it through editing in the next few
days if you'd like? All my stories have been sitting here unedited for quite awhile.
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I would be very grateful if you do it, thanks.
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Love this fic. If it'd be helpful, would be more than happy to proofread for both this and if you ever decide to write a part 2 ^^