Celestia's Secret

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Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #1 · Apr 24th, 2019 · 2 · ·

>secert

Admiral Q Ponyform

Admiral Q Ponyform #2 · Apr 24th, 2019 · 2 · ·

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Gah!

Carrier

Carrier #3 · Apr 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Parts of the chapter repeat several times.

Admiral Q Ponyform

Admiral Q Ponyform #4 · Apr 24th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Carapace is remanmissing

wolfcloud13

wolfcloud13 #5 · Apr 27th, 2019 · 1 · ·

You actually have a good twist. I like it!

Admiral Q Ponyform

Admiral Q Ponyform #6 · Apr 27th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Thank you.

Rhinlord

Rhinlord #7 · Jan 13th, 2020 · · ·

It is not bad, maybe not particularly good but not bad. I do not know why people downvoted. It's got misspellings and the paragraph spacing is strange. This does remind me a ton of Princess Celestia: Changeling Princess though.

Admiral Q Ponyform

Admiral Q Ponyform #8 · Jan 13th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Did some edits, had some doubling of paragraphs I missed before

Emperor Grogar

Emperor Grogar #9 · Jun 6th, 2020 · · ·

Dammit Carapace.
I wanted to be the one to defeat and destroy Celestia!

Ugh... FINE!
I guess i will have to suffice doing it to you!

Kevin Lee

Kevin Lee #10 · Jun 11th, 2020 · · ·

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Did some edits, had some doubling of paragraphs I missed before

Still have some of that:

After weeks of working as a maid Carapace had the general layout of the castle and it's security. Frankly she was disappointed in the security. While that regular guard patrols but not once did they perform a channeling sweep. She was never once in danger of being discovered. She was cleaning the library when I finally got my first look at Celestia. Calling her a pony would be a mistake. She was the size of a Saddale Arabian or myself with large flanks full of curves with some muscle hidden. She was beautiful and I wanted her.

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"And got you I did my body." She rubbed the side of Celelestia as her rear legs lost form and one entered Celestia's pussy without at a reaction. She thrusted in and out of it. "You hold such a image as a virgin goddess but I know the truth. That you are far from a virgin but hadn't had any action for awhile. Though the big surprise was this." Her other rear leg now moved and twirled around a nice hard cock . "Who have thought the Princess of the Sun would have a well hung cock, but that is a little secret you and Luna kept. That all alicorns have them because they are embodiments of the tribes and have to be both male and female to promote unity for them. And I love it...keeping nice and hard has much as I can. In fact I haven't let you orgasm sincecame became my disguise. I remember that day well." Carapace thought back as she thrusted in and out of the alicorn.
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