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locke_jaw


I avoid clichés like the plague.

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He bought an old mansion at a cheap price. He knew it'd be too good to be true but he still did it.

Now some thing inside the house had awoken. Quietly, it watches him. Lurking in every corner, observing his movements day and night. and the worst part is...he knows.

He knew it was there. He can't see it. But he knew it was there.

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The imagery was really good.

You know what? Well done.

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Thanks! Appreciate it.

Hello! Have a review. Points for clouds as "lonely islands" in the darkness -- that's lovely imagery. Quite atmospheric at times, too. The fic didn't grab me, though: that virtual repeat of the first 250 words didn't seem to have any purpose, and overall it reads more like original fic than anything Equestrian. (I think I'd like it a bit more as original fic, tbh.)

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