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You need to learn proper punctuation so your paragraphs aren't one big runoff sentence.
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cheers for the info I’ll try and make them shorter
*humph* nice the caribou gets what they deserves
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some are going to die but that is obvious
You could just add a period before the end quote for a start.
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I can't wait for King dainn to get beat up by the females caribou
First rule of writing a story.. NEVER use pics/gifs to describe what's happening, instead try to describe it in words. Some people prefer to read about it, not look at it.
i like this story already, also pleas have one of them hock up cadence?
I've been wanting to try DMC for years, but I keep getting hooked on everything else. DMC 1-4 in a bundle are I think $20 on Xbox and 5 built up a good hype so I'll probably buy that eventually. I at least know the order thanks to a friend and get the basic jist of it so I really want to see how Vergil (child abusive asshole) acts in this.
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I had plans for Gleaming Shield and Cadence to herd with him
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I put the image because when ever I try to describe it, it become nonsense so the image is easier
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Then you should practice and learn, otherwise you'll get dislikes due to the errors i've pointed out, forgive me if I annoy you.
Get an editor, that's all i can say, otherwise, this could be pretty enjoyable
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you know your stuff :)
Yeah, you need an editor, that or go over what you write once or twice before publishing. Just going to point out a few changes you could make.
Put a period before "I'm coming to kill Sparda", add a 'you' between 'kill' and 'Sparda'.
The scientists of his royal highness King Diann began to initiate Project Summoning. This project has the simple purpose of assisting the king in his quest to rule Equestria and correct it's many problems by summoning obedient, otherworldly creatures to ensure victory. Diann has planned to rule it ever since he became king and right now he was standing in front of the portal but a few feet away as to not be harmed.
A little help from a guy with a murder of crows and an obsession with scythes.
way to go King Diann you thought you can control three powerful warriors as soon as they arrive pffft no.
Is this DMC: Devil May Cry a.k.a. Reboot Dante, Devil May Cry a.k.a. Original Dante, or a composite version (Both versions combined)?
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they are the dante, vergil and nero from dmc 5 but have some of the weapons from the other games
*<>* this story is a wreck ...
I like the story dude
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Me too
Love the idea, it's hard to read, no offense. Please consider thinking about more details to put in and make sure you like the way it sounds before publishing. I'm not saying that you DIDN'T do that, just offering friendly advice. I will still read this though.
Looks fantastic
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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soon I'm just starting a new chapter
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Yeay
I like it man u should keep going
I hate to say this, but this is almost word for word from another story on this sight. I just reread it recently, and this matches almost perfect. The only changes I saw was its now three character, and the ending is different. This is plagiarism, and you might want to take this down and rewrite it before people get angry.
I am sorry to say, but most of this story is taken from another story. The first chapter is only different up until the three are nearing Ponyville. After that, it's pretty much the same. Sane guards names, same meeting Pinkie, same orchard. Its the same. I cant read this story if it is just going to be a carbon copy of the other. Please, make your own story, or stop this one. I will link the other story for reference, so read it before commenting on me.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/414601/displaced-demonslayers
Okay, this is now diverging. Please, don't take others work. I take ideas, not full on words. Ideas are okay, otherwise nothing would be written, but taking anothers story is bad. Thank you for diverging, and I am now happy to read this again.
I wonder who those three are.
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well wait and see here is a tip they can turn into who ever they want
You need an editor my guy. Other then that and a little better pacing you're good.
Dante you pervert your gonna get it for smacking pinkies flank
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Changelings?
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correct amondo my good sir
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I got it right
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yes
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
nice work
Decided to read this due to being into DMC/MLP crossover fics.
Pretty interested in this one.
Wonder how would things go for Celestia and (especially) Luna?
Wondering about Spike too on would he be involved in this too.
I bet those 3 figures are in fact changelings seeking out to bring love and such for Chrysalis they are referring to.