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Rarity Belle


A Dutch gentleman of leisure, living for pleasure, since mirth is my measure. Writing stories that are (mostly) unique and psychological of nature and visiting conventions whenever I can.

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  • MCupcakes 3
    When the next number is finally revealed, the contraptions are set up for something special. The time has come for the horror to continue yet again. For some it is a normal day at the office, for others their last.
    Rarity Belle · 5.9k words  ·  35  29 · 2.2k views
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Before you are all going to wonder, this is the second story that has been going through my major re-writing/re-editing. I changed a couple parts of the story so there won't be (that much) plot holes. The ratings on this story are as they were on the previous version. And there are still any grammatical or structural errors, please, do me a favor and do not point them out... Having to read this cursed story five times after each other for mistakes, is not the best part in the world. Further more, I would like to point out as a Dutchmare writing in a foreign language, you can not get everything 100% accurate. I thank you kindly for taking this into consideration. And yes, to ease your minds, (next to CC3) I am DONE with CupCakes as a whole. So expect NO SEQUEL coming from me anymore. ~Rarity

You rewrote it, and it still sucks.

Although, to be fair, I can't think of many ways to make the concept of 'Pinkie Pie murders people because' good.

1619821 One can not blame me for using the concept. To be fair, now that I look back at it, I am not the biggest fan of it either, but it is the story that got me into writing. I suggest reading a couple other stories of mine like 'Dr. Atmosphere's Memoir', 'The Funeral everypony should go to...' or 'The hat of a Cowgirl'.

And do you mean 'suck' in grammatical and structural order or in the concept of the story, if I may be so bold to ask? ~Rarity

Hey,I making Cupcakes 4 with:Twilight and Spike

2067308 I would love to see the end result, please, send me a link once the story is up and running.

1619821I disagree with that



~:twilightsmile: browniethepony

I wonder why so many people hate this. PLEASE DON'T TELL ME IT'S BECAUSE IT HAS DEATH. That's annoying; I write stories that have deaths, but I guess it's BECAUSE they aren't as violent. Too much undeserved hate.
EDIT
Just finished. That picture almost made a brick fly out of my ass.

2667833 The best explanation I can give for it, is because this is the re-write of the story but it still stands in the same file as the origin. For information, the original was a terrible mess, both grammatical and structural. That and almost every writer in the fandom has written a prequel or sequel to the original.

*chuckles* Yeah, that picture really adds to the effect, now doesn't it?

2670386 THAT THE F*** IS THAT!?

2670501 you don't know?
RANT TIME!
Battra, a giant moth that is the yin to Mothra's:
images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100718210746/godzilla/images/a/a1/Mothrabattleforear1622.jpg
Yang. While Mothra defends humans, Battra sees them as a blemish. Battra is a Kaiju (giant monster) from the Godzilla franchise. Battra is pretty vicious and nasty, but even so, I've noticed comparisons between Mothra and Battra and Celestia and Luna, respectively. Mothra is like Celestia due to being benevolent, while Battra is like Luna due to once being good, but turning evil and fighting Mothra in the same way Luna became Nightmare Moon. Battra dissapeared for eons and only reappeared in Godzilla vs Mothra: The Battle for Earth. When Godzilla appears and fights Mothra and Battra for the second time, both Mothra and Battra ally, thus making Battra a good guy in the same way Nightmare Moon became Luna again.
I'm a Godzilla nerd, aren't I?:twistnerd:

2670501 Also, this is kind of how I pictured you reacted to Battra:

2671744>>2672457

0-0 It are your words, not mine. But it is quite interesting to be honest. Never watched any of the, what is it, 25 movies?

2674342 It's twenty-nine or twenty-eight. Our crap pile 1998 doesn't count. Godzilla is best kaiju:
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2674859 28!? Dear bloody goodness, that's a lot more then I expected. And I already had a feeling that one didn't count and I can understand why. 1998 looks more like a Tyrannosaurus then, the actual thing.

2674872 I know. And guess what? There's a remake of that coming out next year! The Godzilla looks like this:
godzilla-movies.com/media/godzilla2014_godzilladesign_concept.jpg
THAT'S MORE LIKE IT!

2674872 Yeah. I do recommend you check out some of the movies. I recommend Godzilla vs King Ghidorah.
So anyways, if you need Godzilla information, just mail me.

2675062 *chuckles* One can never have too much Godzilla it seems. And I have to admit, the new design looks a lot better indeed yes. Now just hope they don't mess it up with cheap CGI. If I ever do require more information on the subject of this being, I know who to give a shot.

2675076 Thanks! Even so, I wouldn't mind it in CGI, because, just look at the Cloverfield Monster. It looks amazing even though its entirely CGI, so I won't mind if he new Godzilla is that way. Leave rubber suits to Japan; it's how every monster is.
Oh, and one last thing:
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/72/Destoroyah-in-final-form.jpg/320px-Destoroyah-in-final-form.jpg
DESTORAYAAAAAAAAAH!

2675083 I have seen the movie and am quite the fan of the monster. But keep in mind that for every good CGI monster there is a bad one. As for the rubber suit matter,
troll.me/images/ancient-aliens-guy/japan.jpg

2675209 You are right. Even so, if they do use similar CGI to what was in Cloverfield, then Godzilla's gonna be awesome.

2675216 Without a single doubt.

I love how most people dislike gore and torture docs, the same thing is happening to my story. Then again, we WANT the hatred to make these stories infamous... Nice job Rarity Belle, I expect a Twilight torture short story in the future... :pinkiecrazy:

3062113 Oh how right you are on that fact my dear. How right you are. And maybe in the future I will make another story in the series in which it is going to be Twilight's turn.

Keep in mind this story has been around here for almost a year now. Got some other projects in the work as well, guess time will tell.

3062143 Indeed, keep up the good work

wow... this is good, and the pic at the end sold it for me.

3062156 I keep trying every day my dear.

3062201 Thanks darling.

That picture though.....

Pinkie ......How could you ....why.....Element of Harmony:Laughter.....Yeah right more like Murder

:fluttercry::flutterrage: NOOOO! Flim and Flam died. :fluttercry::fluttercry:

3715246 I'm afraid not. it was made by a friend from a friend. Sadly, I never made contact with that friend, and I lost contact with the other friend through time.

3716042 That makes two of us.

Cupcakes 2: The Dash of Frosting.

Comment posted by TwilightPoopSparkle deleted Mar 6th, 2014

Why the hell would Rarity ever thank Pinkie for paralyzing her after everything she did?

4280609 Is it bad that if I say that even to this very day...I don't have a single clue about that part myself?

4282550
Don't worry, we all have our moments.

I've watched Cupcakes, and read it, but I LIKED dis one!
Not dat I din't like the other one.
U SHOULD MAKE A THIRD!!

4637166 Already did, a long time ago.

3620446 Pinkie Pie the element of (S)laughter.

The pic at the end is broken.

6189104 It's in the re-writing progress so... That's going to be changed soon enough.

Still sobbing over the death of Rainbow in the first cupcakes. :raritycry:

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