The element of generosity is tired of her current position in life. She doesn't see anything sitting any longer. She find that it is time to raise up to her true potential. The potential that is the truth in her own eyes at least.
With the passage of time she comes up with a plan that will surprise friend and enemy alike. But also allow her to gain new abilities and powers she could only dream of. And that all in the cause of one pursuit. A thing crazy enough that it might actually work out for her.
Follow the always so graceful unicorn in her path down to madness and insanity. Two things she plays like an organist pressing its keys. A terrible catastrophe played by her symphony, a truly terrifying work of art.
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Please keep in mind that even though it is never mentioned in the story itself, this involves a Rarity that is five years older then the one from the show. Also, takes place prior the S2 finale.
The title card is edited by me with the text, but is originally created by johnjoseco
I tried, I really did.
But if you don't go back through this and fix it I'm not going to finish it.
1988896 Then allow me to ask you just on what ground I have to go back, grammatical or structural ground?
This story took me over 2 hours to read and apart from the occasional spelling error i loved every second of it simple as
1989832
The grammatical one, the structure is fine, I knew where it was going but couldn't get myself past all of the words I had change in my head.
1990115 I am glad you did my dear, I truly am.
1990253 Odd though, given how i read and read and read the story over to get them all out. But i shall have a look soon enough, thank you for telling me.
It's not bad; the concept is good.
Pacing isn't great and the character motivations aren't terribly believable though.
Amazing. I've been waiting to read this for a long time and I wasn't disappointed.
The only criticism is constructive, and it's that the characters would be easier to believe if they used abbreviations. So, for example, instead of 'I am' or 'You are' I think 'I'm' and 'You're' would be better.
But aside from that, fantastic work.
The desc was confusing to read, with some words used incorrectly, but I braved through it, and read the first chapter.
Uh.....sorry, but thumbs down.
3545376 Nope...not going to do it anymore. Not going to play the 'I'm Dutch card' again. I just need to live with the facts as they are.
Anyway, I'm glad that you at least gave me an explanation on why you thumbed it down.
I all of your stories... when are more chapters being posted of this?
3621118 *blushes* You words mean a lot to me darling. As for the chapters, there is this little trick when it comes down to releases of chapters.
(Mostly) a week apart from each other, with the exception of one.
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