>gasp
...it returns.

Now that's what I call a holiday gift! Great to get more of this.

Of course it's another janky machine they're using. I wonder how they've been capturing her friends, though?

What a fun day.

Really love how you wrote the part with the machine there. Can't wait to see what it leads to in the next chapter and really hope it involves more unaware POV.

Blast from the past. As much as the transition in Chapter 5 was abrupt, the pacing now that you've established 'we're in the deep end now' is excellent. I hope we get some more intermediate scenes of 'not normal being normal', especially if AJ is just playing along.

I can't wait to see what DISCORD will do to Flim and Flam after he finds out what they did to Fluttershy and her friends.

Hope you are doing well.
Looking forward to seeing the next chapter but I hope you are doing alright

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Thanks for checking in! I'm well! I promise I'm working on stuff, I'm just having... a lot of trouble. I dunno' why. Something is coming, though! Stay tuned...

I have enjoyed all your stories and am looking forward to whatever you write next, but this one I think is my favourite. I'm a sucker for broad secret conspiracy-style brainwashing, and in particular I really enjoyed the stuff with Recherche, but seeing the varying forms and outcome of the control in all the character's day-to-day lives was great.