Well, this certainly has my attention.

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<3

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I didn't say this at the time but you basically read my mind with this comment, thanks for the support

I'm curious as to how long the anthology format will be kept up, or if the whole story will be like that, even when it starts to get to the end

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If it comes out the way i'm expecting plot should kinda "start happening" in the next chapter or so. I'd expect a couple more of these character specific chapters but it won't be the whole story

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Alright.

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I already can't wait to see who else is caught in their web, and who starts to uncover it.

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Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint :)

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This is the nicest comment I've ever gotten :')
I'm in the home stretch for Chapter 3 and stuff like this makes me really wanna hit that deadline! <3 Thanks

These kind of slow but subtle "mind control" stories are my favorite. The theme of the victims not knowing makes this very interesting.

Laughing at the description changes. No need to feel bad at being slow to deliver free words. You're just building anticipation.

I have no idea how I got here, but this was a surprisingly fun read :) I hope you keep going with it. You managed to write the situation as sinister without being cliched; the 'villainy' as it were, feels natural to read.