Uh Oh, I wonder how Rarity will react to this if she ever finds out she was mind controls, I bet she will blow them up with her magic and the Princesses won't see anything wrong with what she did to them either.

I see the source of influence in this one and I like it.
I do encourage you to keep going with this one.

It's a great chapter, but the description kind of does this a disservice by being pretty vague. Hope to see more.

Alright, you have my attention.

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Fair point bud, I'll see if I can do something about that <3

9544355
glad to hear it!

9544267
thanks!

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I'm curious, why the name Recherche? It's just Research in french.

Aww geez, I'm all for some mind controlly sexy fun, but this is ruining Raritys life, that's just a bit uncomfortable. I'll follow for now, but if it continues like this I may drop the fic.

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Recherché means very rare in French. Source: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/recherche

Also, nice work on the fic!

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I'm sorry to hear that, If I'm honest things are likely to get worse before they get better, I think I tend to skew a bit dark, but thanks for giving it a chance!

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It’s actually a bizarre loan word in that in English it’s spelled identically complete with accent aigu (é) but means “very rare, exotic, of studied refinement or elegance; precious; affected; pretentious.”. Whereas you’re right in French it just means “research” which is a lot less applicable.

I kinda started with "I want her to have a stripper name" and worked backwards from there but "Rarity" and "Generosity" already sound stripper-ey and most of the other ones I came across that were related to them were either too generic or felt too similar, like "Charity". Also I shaved the accent cause I took French all through highschool and fuck than language.

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Fair.

I like this! I think it has a lot of potential, especially if you focus on a different character each chapter, maybe weaving them all together loosely. Perhaps you can put them all in unique, erotic situations, if that isn't already the plan. Enough of my giving input where it wasn't asked for! Good work, nice descriptions and flow. I hope you decide to keep going!

Good stuff,looking forward to the next one.

I made an account JUST to say this is absolutely FANTASTIC!!! Cannot wait to read more. :)

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